Ketuur Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 [b][center]This is my Kickoff Card (what many new people call, thier first card). I really think it isn't that great, but just give me your comments. Thanks! [spoiler=Graceful Summoner] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/5453/411518.jpg[/img] [quote]You can Set this card face-down in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Spell Card. If this face-down card in your Spell & Trap Card Zone is destroyed by an opponent's card effect and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Fish or Sea Serpent Type monster from your Deck or Hand.[/quote][/spoiler][/center][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 very unique effect, i like it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 You comment on yours you do mine. Deal? [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249088-new-contenders-24/"]Comment Please![/url] It is very unique, very original. Circulation rather than your name should be '1st Edition' or 'Limited Edition', unless there are new ones. I would say I'm looking forward to see more cards from you. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Thanks. Ill check out that card Kyng. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Card? More like Set! LOL LOL LOL LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Wow, this is really impressive for a first card. It's pretty balanced, useful and the OCG is almost flawless(OCG is the Grammar used in Yugioh cards). The only OCG errors I can see is that you put a dash between a type of monster and Type(Beast-Type, Sea Serpent-Type, Fish-Type etc.). The image is nice, a rarity in new members. I have to say, this is a very well made card. Great job man. 9.9/10 and a Rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Thanks Renji, i got the image off JazinKay archive on PB. I found it because I was googlin' images on the WEB part for search and that came up somehow. I also try to look at some YGO cards around here and there for the "OCG" so I can get it right on my first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Jazin Kay's archive is one of the best places to find card images. I get my images from there almost anytime I make a Realistic Card. But, if you use one of his images, you should really give credit. I don't think it's against the rules to use an image without giving credit, but I think it still seems like the right thing to do. Anyway, this is a great card man. A truly excellent first card. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 This card is equally as good as the one I repped. REP FOR YOU! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted May 11, 2011 Report Share Posted May 11, 2011 Nice, original effect. Don't see any problems with this card, and the image is good. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vough Posted May 12, 2011 Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Fish or Sea Serpent Type monster. From where? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 Just from anywhere... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted May 12, 2011 Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 [quote name='Ketuur' timestamp='1305160781' post='5203934'] Just from anywhere... [/quote] I think it must be specified. Just put "from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard" at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ketuur Posted May 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2011 Oh, ok. I'll fix it. FIXED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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