♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 [center][IMG]http://i1140.photobucket.com/albums/n563/DecietfulKing/RTSD.jpg[/IMG] [color="#696969"][size="3"][font="Times New Roman"][b]Name: No. 23 Raijin the Storm King Rank: 4 Attribute: DARK Type/Subtype: Thunder/Exceed/Effect Lore:[/b] [b][i][list] 2 Level 4 monsters When this card is successfully Exceed Summoned, draw 1 card. If you draw a monster place it on this card as an Exceed Material Monster. That monster's Level is treated as 4. Once per turn, when this card's attack is negated, you can remove 1 Exceed Material Monster from this card to destroy the attack target. Inflict damage equal to the Level of that monster x100 or the Rank of that monster x200. When this card has no Exceed Material Monsters on it, destroy it when a card effect is activated. [/list][/i] [/font][/size][/color][/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 EPIC! I bestow upon to thee: [size="7"]10/10[/size] Rate mine? [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249088-new-contenders/"]Rate please! Commisions Accepted![/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 thanks =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted May 13, 2011 Report Share Posted May 13, 2011 First balanced Exceed card I've seen on this site Good Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 good, the english translation is there the burn effect to yourself is fine to balance it out 2800 def is a bit high for its level though, but other than that it's fine 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Thanks ragnarok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1305505896' post='5211514'] good, the english translation is there the burn effect to yourself is fine to balance it out 2800 def is a bit high for its level though, but other than that it's fine 8.9/10 [/quote] Does the level 4 technically matter though because Exceeds do not have levels they have "ranks" so it having four stars means nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 well that's your call I'm still new to learning exceeds myself You explain everything you know about them first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Yeah, 4 Ranked Exceed almost the same with Synchro Level 6 IMO. 2800 is too much, 2500 is fine. If you draw a Monster Card, overlay it on this card as an Exceed Material Monster. Emhh, this Exceed is unique IMO. Because it can keep destroying monster when your attack is negated, also when it has no Exceed Material Monster. That's the cool parts. No need to change 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='♠Decietful King♠' timestamp='1305284478' post='5205335'] 2 Level 4 monsters When this card is successfully Exceed Summoned, draw 1 card. If you draw a monster place it on this card as an Exceed Material Monster. That monster's Level is treated as 4. Once per turn, [size="4"][b]if[/b][/size] this card's attack is negated, you can remove 1 Exceed Material Monster from this card to destroy the attack target. Inflict damage equal to the Level of that monster x100 or the Rank of that monster x200. When this card has no Exceed Material Monsters on it, destroy it when a card effect is activated. [/quote] other than the tiny OCG fix (I think) I find it a great card ^^ balanced and with a good drawback 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 This would be great addition to my Machina Emperors deck ^^ 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 thanks for all your comments =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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