shelds9 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 This is my newest creation! They are all Dark, Fiend-type monsters that focus on drawing cards, but also have the downside of having to discard cards. They will consist of Monsters, Spells and Traps. Also, the name comes from a synonym of greed, Voracity! Remember, reps for reviews! Here they are! [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Voracity Phantom] [img]http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/1983/235906.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Voracity Behemoth] [img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1983/235906.jpg[/img] When this card is Tribute Summoned discard 1 card. If you cannot, draw 1 card. If this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, select up to 2 cards in your Graveyard, and add them to your deck. During your End Phase, if you have 3 or more cards in your hand, draw 1 card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Voracity Goblin] [img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/1983/235906.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Where you get those images? card 1>1900 ATK is too high, commonly all arche best level 4 comes with 1800 ATK. so i suggest to reduce it , the idea is good . never think that kind of effect card2>level 8 is enough for that. select 2 cards is bit too much for me, 1 and it should be fine. the other are fine. card3>Fair enough for me, OCG review Deck, Defense Position, draw and During each of...at the last card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shelds9 Posted May 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Thanks for taking the time to look through them! +Rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 All 3 of them look nice. For Phantom, I don't see an issue with it having 1900 ATK - plus, to use his effect means that he won't be destroying anything anyways. For Behemoth, I think Level 8 (like Maha suggested) is probably nice, since Level 9 doesn't make a difference anymore. The drawing is fine, but the return from Graveyard effects seems a bit pointless to me, unless, like Pot of Avarice, you are allowed to draw immediately afterwards. Voracity Goblin - At first glance, it almost seems OP'ed, until you see Standby Phase. This prevents you from drawing immediately after dropping it down. Plus, unless you immediately Synchro, it's not going to last long, and you'll probably end up paying more of a price than you would without it. You have the start of a nice archtype here. However, I suggest you add some support that makes these less "risky". However, be careful not to overdo it, as then, the drawpower will be easily abused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 All three cards are great I mean it is the prefect counter for Neos Alius next. I agree with the 8 star mainly because with the deck based around drawing power it would be great to use trade-in with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Dude Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 ok here's some review for you but before that your OCG is not good just capitalization is needed and placing comas in the correct spot. card 1 = useful with final attack order when your opponent controls a skull servant and having 1900 ATK is not much of a dealio since more anti-meta cards are rounding up. card 2 = you do know you can make it a Level 8 since ATK and effect is not good enough to enter Level 9. but 1st effect is useless cause discarding a card is only needed for dandy OTKs or such so the 2nd effect is most likely to be activated. the Pot of benevolence effect is again not much of a dealio unless you added a draw effect like what Zextra said. card 3 = DARK WORLD ABUSE. Other than that i pretty like the draw power it gives while it maintains in the field especially if its equipped with mist body. (The Heart of clear water or anything like that is not advisable for card 3 since it must be destroyed by a card effect to start the DARK WORLD ABUSE with Goldd, Sillva and such Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blah_blah12629 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Well for me, I think Phantom's ATK is too much, maybe 1600/1800 ATK would do. For Behemoth, isn't it unfair to draw a card if you have more than 3 cards in your hand? Maybe you can draw a card if you have less than 3 cards in your hand. For Goblin, maybe you can add a little more DEF (maybe 1000 DEF?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 Phantom gets OPed too much draw power when all you have to do is spare the opponent's monster now, had it had only 1200 atk for lv4, THEN it'd be balanced out 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted May 16, 2011 Report Share Posted May 16, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1305535956' post='5212557'] Phantom gets OPed too much draw power when all you have to do is spare the opponent's monster now, had it had only 1200 atk for lv4, THEN it'd be balanced out 7/10 [/quote] ... You baffle me I swear. Phantom is not "overpowered" in the slightest. Its a 1900 atk fiend, it'll get off maybe one shot and in fiend turbo, it'll actually give the deck a nice boost. But wait, no it won't. Since it doesnt actually remove anything at all and wastes an attack. Behemoth is actually quite amazing for what it is o-O. Not exactly the most balanced thing in the world (underpowered if anything but that isnt bad), but it's good. Kudos on you, Shelds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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