Valkyrus Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/sot4m.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [quote]3 level 4 monsters. Once per turn by removing 1 Exceed Material Monster from this card you can have your opponent skip their next turn. If you use this effect this card is destroyed during your End Phase. When this card is removed from the field, you can Special Summon its Exceed Material Monsters in face-up position on your side of the field. Their ATK is halved. [/quote] I guess it's a little OP'd but I'll let you all decide on it yourselves ^^ ; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardCaster Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Lol every time there is an exceed card its you who makes them =) Anyways i wouldn't say its too OPed as you lose the monster and (the way I interpret it) you only get 2 of the materials back right? One slight adjustment, make the materials all have to be warrior or something like that, i think that will get rid of its OPness P.S. How do you always find the perfect artwork for your cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkM Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 it's to OPd yeah, but i love the picture and the idea of the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [quote name='CardCaster' timestamp='1305714030' post='5216541'] Lol every time there is an exceed card its you who makes them =) Anyways i wouldn't say its too OPed as you lose the monster and (the way I interpret it) you only get 2 of the materials back right? One slight adjustment, make the materials all have to be warrior or something like that, i think that will get rid of its OPness P.S. How do you always find the perfect artwork for your cards? [/quote] Thank you :"D aw, but I'm not the only one who makes Exceeds~ I guess most people don't have the exact template, but I made my own exceed background so I didn't need to look for one all over the internet. And yeah, you get only 2 of the materials. hmm..I might make that adjustment, but I wanted it to be more useful, so maybe I'll make it so when it's destroyed you get the [i]removed [/i] exceed material instead of the remaining ones. So you only get 1 monster back. But maybe.. Oh, haha, well in reality I first look for the images and then I make the cards ;D I just go around dA, danbooru, photobucket, flickr, and if there's an artwork that I like and I think it'd look good on a card I download it and I make the card. That's why I'm not a very good player either, I prefer a good artwork on a card, than the card itself. I guess I have a sweet spot for the artwork since I'm an art student. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 Even though you seem to think I hate you, actually it's not so. However, I [i]can[/i] say that the idea seems way too OP. Since your opponent's turn is skipped you can Normal Summon another Level 4 monster right after your End Phase, attack, and in the MP2 go for this again. It can promote easy wins. Its summoning conditions aren't that hard in Legendary Six Sams, commonly known for spamming 3 Kizan. I say it's too OP. Maybe change its SS effect to just 1 Overlay Unit, or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [quote name='Darkplant' timestamp='1305717346' post='5216579'] Even though you seem to think I hate you, actually it's not so. However, I [i]can[/i] say that the idea seems way too OP. Since your opponent's turn is skipped you can Normal Summon another Level 4 monster right after your End Phase, attack, and in the MP2 go for this again. It can promote easy wins. Its summoning conditions aren't that hard in Legendary Six Sams, commonly known for spamming 3 Kizan. I say it's too OP. Maybe change its SS effect to just 1 Overlay Unit, or something. [/quote] I don't think you hate me, do you? D": You just say what you think without holding back anything, I respect that. Let's forget the GAMBLE argument we had. But yeah, I did say in the OP I knew it was kinda OP'd but also I said this in the comments: [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1305715390' post='5216555'] hmm..I might make that adjustment, but I wanted it to be more useful, so maybe I'll make it so when it's destroyed you get the [i]removed [/i] exceed material instead of the remaining ones. So you only get 1 monster back. But maybe.. [/quote] Which is what you advised me to do, no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 I'm epic at reading previous replies. Kay, that's better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Giga Hand Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 There's only one card that can skip your opponent's turn, I think. Arcana Force XXI - The World. It's a level 8 that can't summon itself, so it's really hard to get out. Tribute 2 monsters to skip their turn, if the coin flip works out in your favor. You can in theory make some sort of token engine with The Moon to make a pseudo Yata-lock, but it's too unreliable to be that effective. This card, with 3 copies, is broken indeed. Even if you only get 1 monster back at the end of the turn, you can attack with your 3 monsters, Exceed Summon, then get 1 back, then take another turn. Summon another level 4, and if you're lucky (or running six sams) another, and Exceed Summon again. Broken even with 0 ATK and DEF. I love the idea of getting the exceed materials back, but this card doesn't mesh well with that. The fact that six sams exist breaks any possibility of this card being rank 3 or 4 and not being overpowered. Rank 5 could go well with Dark Worlds and not be overpowered, unless you have discarding as a drawback. EDIT: just noticed an OCG error. "When this card is removed from the field you can Special Summon its Exceed Materials in face-up [b]Attack/Defense[/b] position." I believe you're going to remove that effect anyway, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 looks like Mitsrugi from Soul Calibur I would have left them keep their regular attacks, but negate the exceed material monsters' effects for at least 1 turn instead 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardCaster Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1305715390' post='5216555'] Oh, haha, well in reality I first look for the images and then I make the cards ;D I just go around dA, danbooru, photobucket, flickr, and if there's an artwork that I like and I think it'd look good on a card I download it and I make the card. That's why I'm not a very good player either, I prefer a good artwork on a card, than the card itself. I guess I have a sweet spot for the artwork since I'm an art student. [/quote] Lol, hasn't heard of danbooru, go on, type in yugioh... 0.0 bit nnsfw??!! LOL no-one was present to its ok =P. Still besides that seem liek a good site for artwork thnx! btw first quote, hope this works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [quote name='CardCaster' timestamp='1305754982' post='5217604'] Lol, hasn't heard of danbooru, go on, type in yugioh... 0.0 bit nnsfw??!! LOL no-one was present to its ok =P. Still besides that seem liek a good site for artwork thnx! btw first quote, hope this works [/quote] haha, yeah, sorry, I forgot to tell you it's not very sfw > ^ >; but it's an enormous imageboard, there's a lot of everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Resident Fascist Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [size="4"][font="Century Gothic"][b][i]"Exceed Network Open! Booster Limit Rank 4! Overlay 1, Check! Overlay 2, Check! Stars Scattered across the Overlay network, Unite to become a Sword Of Justice that punishes the hearts of evildoers! Alpha Limits, Broken! Beta Limits, Broken! Come On! Samurai From the Future! Deliver Justice!"[/i][/b][/font][/size] OT: I like this card. Lots. It's.so.good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote name='Invalid Arguement' timestamp='1305851311' post='5219684'] [size="4"][font="Century Gothic"][b][i]"Exceed Network Open! Booster Limit Rank 4! Overlay 1, Check! Overlay 2, Check! Stars Scattered across the Overlay network, Unite to become a Sword Of Justice that punishes the hearts of evildoers! Alpha Limits, Broken! Beta Limits, Broken! Come On! Samurai From the Future! Deliver Justice!"[/i][/b][/font][/size] OT: I like this card. Lots. It's.so.good. [/quote] I love it when people randomly create summon chants for my Exceeds :"D I like that one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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CardCaster Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1305896976' post='5220438'] I love it when people randomly create summon chants for my Exceeds :"D I like that one! [/quote] So when you are dueling, would you do a chant everytime you summon a synchro/exceed XD. Btw any ideas on how ur gonna mod this card then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [quote name='CardCaster' timestamp='1305994224' post='5222907'] So when you are dueling, would you do a chant everytime you summon a synchro/exceed XD. Btw any ideas on how ur gonna mod this card then? [/quote] nah, it's just fun to read them :'D excuse me though, what do you mean "mod" ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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