♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 18, 2011 Report Share Posted May 18, 2011 [center]So I'm in the process of writing a fan-fiction named, Yu-Gi-Oh!: Demanding Identity(Name Pending). With this Set will be featured as the deuteragonist's Main set of cards(secondary main character). These card's will of course feature my new Game Mechanic Reaction Summon. But the preview card for this set shall be the Dismal Fire Drake. The Dismal monsters rely on card effects that depend on negating attacks and being destroyed in general also protecting your Life Points such as the below card. I did all the Japanese parts by myself and the Picture is by Raphtil. Template by Judas I resized it a little so it wasn't so overly huge. So without further ado here is the Set preview: [img]http://images.wikia.com/ycm/images/a/aa/Dismal_Fire_DrakeYCM_Wiki.jpg[/img] [color="#696969"][size="3"][font="Times New Roman"][b]Name: Dismal Fire Drake Level: 5 Attribute: FIRE Type/Subtype: Dragon/Effect Lore:[/b] [b][i][list] This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set except from your Graveyard, while you control 1 face-up "Dismal" Monster Card. While you control this face-up card you take no Battle Damage involving a "Dismal" monster. [/list][/i] [/font][/size][/color][/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 shame it's lv5, and 1900 atk is quite weak for it I'd have made it 2100 atk or something and that all it does is prevent battle damage is a bit bland, though was that your intention? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 This card cannot be Normal Summon[b]ed[/b] or Set except from your Graveyard while you control 1 face-up "Dismal" monster. While you control this face-up card, you take no Battle Damage involving a "Dismal" monster. Pretty good idea, for that summoning. Need to see other Dismal though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1305776992' post='5218314'] shame it's lv5, and 1900 atk is quite weak for it I'd have made it 2100 atk or something and that all it does is prevent battle damage is a bit bland, though was that your intention? [/quote] The point is that the Summoning requirements are like this for a reason and with the three main Effect Monsters on the field you can go through the normal summoning routine without sending it to the Graveyard, Dismal Larva which will be on the next update. And Dismal Archfiend also allows you to prevent other dismal from being destroyed by battle. The monsters are made to lockdown your opponent but the Spells and Traps will revolve around heavy burn damage. [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1305784386' post='5218428'] This card cannot be Normal Summon[b]ed[/b] or Set except from your Graveyard while you control 1 face-up "Dismal" monster. While you control this face-up card, you take no Battle Damage involving a "Dismal" monster. Pretty good idea, for that summoning. Need to see other Dismal though [/quote] I'll be updating as soon as I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 19, 2011 Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 and how much heavy burn damage are you intending here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2011 nothing extremely unreasonable. So like around 300-400 depending on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Organized Chaos Posted May 22, 2011 Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 Interesting start. Sounds like a pretty sound Stall/Burn archetype, I like the idea a lot as (prepare for old-timie Yu-Gi-Oh player rant) nowadays everything is Synchro Summon ! Synchro Summon ! Synchro Summon ! Not like that's a bad thing. But yeah a good start. Are they all going to be FIRE ? The picture is awesome and I like the sound of an archtype based on despair. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 [quote name='GLaDOS MK. 2' timestamp='1306097597' post='5225706'] Interesting start. Sounds like a pretty sound Stall/Burn archetype, I like the idea a lot as (prepare for old-timie Yu-Gi-Oh player rant) nowadays everything is Synchro Summon ! Synchro Summon ! Synchro Summon ! Not like that's a bad thing. But yeah a good start. Are they all going to be FIRE ? The picture is awesome and I like the sound of an archtype based on despair. 8/10 [/quote] No they aren't all going to be FIRE but I thought it would be fitting for my fan-fiction. As the deuteragonist's main set of cards because he is in despair of his lack of never beating the main character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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