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[quote]You can Tribute Summon this card by Tributing 1 WATER Warrior-Type or Spellcaster-Type monster. When this card is Normal Summoned, look at your opponent's hand and select up to 2 cards. Return those cards to the Deck, then your opponent draws 1 card. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, your opponent looks at your hand and selects 1 card. Return that card to the Deck.[/quote][/center]

Another card made solely for the picture... still, tell me what you think :)

So long,

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OCG Fix

You can Normal Summon this card by Tributing 1 WATER Warrior-Type or Spellcaster-Type monster. When this card is Normal Summoned, look at your opponent's hand and select up to 2 cards. Return those cards to the Deck, then your opponent draws 1 card. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, your opponent looks at your hand and selects 1 card. Return that card to the Deck.


I think its ok
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[quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1305826866' post='5218930']
OCG Fix

You can Normal Summon this card by Tributing 1 WATER Warrior-Type or Spellcaster-Type monster. When this card is Normal Summoned, look at your opponent's hand and select up to 2 cards. Return those cards to the Deck, then your opponent draws 1 card. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, your opponent looks at your hand and selects 1 card. Return that card to the Deck.

I think its ok[/quote]
Thanks for the OCG fix... that didn't need to be fixed. "You can Tribute Summon this card by..." is perfectly fine OCG.

[quote name='mako tha shark-man' timestamp='1305827083' post='5218936']
i like it...
fix the ocg thats all.
i giv a 8.5/10[/quote]
Yeah, see above, no (OCG) fixes needed. I don't care about ratings, I want constructive criticism... well, at least you like it, that's something... I guess :unsure:

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1305842795' post='5219374']
you should have said 1 WATER Warrior-Type or 1 WATER Spellcaster-Type[/quote]
Probably... oh well, you can imagine it in there, but it should be clear enough as it is ;)
Yes, she can hold herself much better, but is still probably a little too good. The Summon and effect is a +-0 that allows you to see your opponent's hand, so I added that drawback and lowered the ATK a lot in the creating process.
Glad you like it :)

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Ignore the OCG fix people, they don't understand you were here longer then them and had there effects fixed by others......

Anyhow, I like this card and everything....It loves the Ice barrier Monsters and Water Monsters....--:)

This is not an rating, just a judgement based scale on to what I have to describe to give you comments...

You can call it a rating if you like, but I prefer you don't.....


OCG:10/10--No Error that I can see
Strategy: 10/10---Best Strategy so far, I like the fact of returning cards from the hand to the deck, b/c I hate it when my opponent has cards in their hand....Cloudian Altus would like this card.
Drawback: 10/10---Means the Drawbacks match the effect, so its even
Picture:8/10---Picture is great, but would love it if it was more Ice Barrier Themed, even-though that is not your intent.
Up'd/Op'd: 7/7=Balanced

Total:.96/1 = 96% = A+ - A++ Love it, make more

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[quote name='Master White' timestamp='1306018267' post='5223843']
Ignore the OCG fix people, they don't understand you were here longer then them and had there effects fixed by others......

Anyhow, I like this card and everything....It loves the Ice barrier Monsters and Water Monsters....--:)

This is not an rating, just a judgement based scale on to what I have to describe to give you comments...

You can call it a rating if you like, but I prefer you don't.....


OCG:10/10--No Error that I can see
Strategy: 10/10---Best Strategy so far, I like the fact of returning cards from the hand to the deck, b/c I hate it when my opponent has cards in their hand....Cloudian Altus would like this card.
Drawback: 10/10---Means the Drawbacks match the effect, so its even
Picture:8/10---Picture is great, but would love it if it was more Ice Barrier Themed, even-though that is not your intent.
Up'd/Op'd: 7/7=Balanced

Total:.96/1 = 96% = A+ - A++ Love it, make more[/quote]
Thanks for the detailed insight :)
And I'll make more cards in the future, whenever I find a picture that inspires me, I'm in :lol:

[quote name='~TezcaTlipoca!~' timestamp='1306018434' post='5223851']
BEAST.

Everything else I had in mind to say has already been said.

Great card, 9/10[/quote]
Thanks, glad you liked it :)

*bump*

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