Valkyrus Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 Yet another Exceed by me. Thought maybe since most people liked my other Exceeds I'd make another one ^^ So here it is: this time it's an Exceed supporting Exceed. [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/ghc.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [quote]4 level 4 monsters. You can Exceed Summon this card on your side of the field by using monsters on both sides of the field. Once per turn you can remove one Exceed Material Monster from this card and put it on another Exceed Monster on the field. If this card has no Exceed Material Monsters it is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by its own effect you can Special Summon one level 3 or lower monster from your Deck . Its effect is negated.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠Decietful King♠ Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 OMG where did you get that picture??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 Ninja'd. This is a nice card, but it would be better as a Spell card, IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote name='♠Decietful King♠' timestamp='1305921906' post='5221018'] OMG where did you get that picture??? [/quote] not telling till you leave a comment on the card = ^ = [quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1305922568' post='5221030'] Ninja'd.This is a nice card, but it would be better as a Spell card, IMO. [/quote] what kind of spell? o ^ o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 Lol! A Chimeratechy version Exceed Monster. Pretty nice. XD I see lots of abusability with this card. I like! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1305923807' post='5221066'] not telling till you leave a comment on the card = ^ = what kind of spell? o ^ o [/quote] Probably more of a quickplay so you could activate it on your opponent's turn. But however, maybe lower the Level so it would be easier to use when in desperate need. 9/10 Now tell where you got it? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cody Frost Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1305922568' post='5221030'] Ninja'd. This is a nice card, but it would be better as a Spell card, IMO. [/quote] Actually, I think it would be better to leave this guy as an Exceed Monster and make a generic support card for Exceed Monsters, kind of like Urgent Tuning. If that card is in spell form it would be even better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote name='Cody Frost' timestamp='1305924759' post='5221101'] Lol! A Chimeratechy version Exceed Monster. Pretty nice. XD I see lots of abusability with this card. I like! 9/10 [/quote] Thank you :'D [quote name='Daemon' timestamp='1305924900' post='5221108'] Probably more of a quickplay so you could activate it on your opponent's turn. But however, maybe lower the Level so it would be easier to use when in desperate need. 9/10Now tell where you got it? :3 [/quote] hmm, well instead of the level, shouldn't I lower the number of monsters needed? anyways, got the picture off deviantart, artist is JayAxer ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1305925779' post='5221143'] Thank you :'D hmm, well instead of the level, shouldn't I lower the number of monsters needed? anyways, got the picture off deviantart, artist is JayAxer ^^ [/quote] Then it wouldn't really be useful for another Exceed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted May 20, 2011 Report Share Posted May 20, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1305925779' post='5221143'] hmm, well instead of the level, shouldn't I lower the number of monsters needed? anyways, got the picture off deviantart, artist is JayAxer ^^ [/quote] No, it loses it's touch if you do. Making it require level 3 is better IMO, but meh. I would say make it a bit more powerful and don't touch the limits. Maybe take out Once per turn? Or would that be too much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 AWESOME PICTURE... but the stats seem way low and in the effect any numbers should be used with actual #s, not spelt out in words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 the only thing I'd change is the last effect Yes you negate the effect, but I wouldn't negate it PERMANENTLY maybe just 1 or 2 turns and that's enough 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardCaster Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 Nah i think this card is GREAT, its summon requirements stop it from being abuse-able and the summoning a level 3 is i guess a meat shield/exceed/synchro material... Amirite? Lol funny story... OMG look an exceed... oh wait... guess who its made by XD your cards are awesome!!!!! Keep up the great work! Btw would it be possible to give your exceed template? Cuz i'd really like one. (plz =]) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted May 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1305952116' post='5222117'] the only thing I'd change is the last effectYes you negate the effect, but I wouldn't negate it PERMANENTLYmaybe just 1 or 2 turns and that's enough9/10 [/quote] well that monster is meant to be used for an Exceed/Synchro Summon on the next turn, so its effect wouldn't really be needed after the 2nd End Phase. Besides, its effect is negated only when it's on the field. But thanks for your comment! ^^ [quote name='CardCaster' timestamp='1305983489' post='5222633'] Nah i think this card is GREAT, its summon requirements stop it from being abuse-able and the summoning a level 3 is i guess a meat shield/exceed/synchro material... Amirite?Lol funny story... OMG look an exceed... oh wait... guess who its made by XD your cards are awesome!!!!! Keep up the great work!Btw would it be possible to give your exceed template? Cuz i'd really like one. (plz =]) [/quote] youareriteyes. :'D sure I can give it to you, but you should add me on skype first so I send it to you since it's a big file. Just PM me with your skype name and I'll add you. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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