Techfiends

[Techfiend]

These are my first cards and archetypes. I want helpful constructive critictism. I know they are not very good, so I want to know how to make them better. Please comment and rate, because I am thinking about making more "techfiends"


This is what I have so far:

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[angel killer315]

one thing I noticed off top was that they have two attributes... you should make them all have one but have a common effect "this card is also treated as a (insert card attribute here)"

the card ocg is way off... and techfiend archknight is op'd even though it is an usual circumstance win 6/10

[ragnarok1945]

lv4 and 5 seem a bigger liability problem than benefit to you

at least General and Commander have other effects to go with them

I'd remove the instant win effect for Archknight as well

6.5/10

[Techfiend]

Thank you for the tips.

[~British Soul~]

here's some advice for you:
for cards with long effects post them under the card to make it easier for us to read

aside from that i like the cards apart from the win condition. its confusing and cards with win conditions are those that benefit you and not your opponent

good work nonetheless 7/10