Spoon Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [center][IMG]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2236/hermitf.jpg[/IMG] [quote]When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 2 "Snow Wolf Tokens" in face-up Attack Position (Beast-Type/WATER/Level 4/1600 ATK/800 DEF). These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon or used as Synchro Material Monsters. You can Tribute 1 "Snow Wolf Token" you control to negate the Normal Summon of an opponent's monster and destroy it. When this card is destroyed and sent from the field to the Graveyard, Tribute all "Snow Wolf Tokens" you control and destroy 1 card your opponent controls for each Token Tributed this way.[/quote][/center] Another card made purely for the art... still, constructive criticism appreciated, as always Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 I think it is balanced enough. It is most definitely useful and playable. It may be a tad OP'ed being able to negate 2 Normal Summon. Maybe put that if it is destroy the tokens are destroyed and you take 500 damage instead of destroying your opponent's card. But that is just a suggestion I don't think you NEED to change it. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted May 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1306172717' post='5227322'] I think it is balanced enough. It is most definitely useful and playable. It may be a tad OP'ed being able to negate 2 Normal Summon. Maybe put that if it is destroy the tokens are destroyed and you take 500 damage instead of destroying your opponent's card. But that is just a suggestion I don't think you NEED to change it.[/quote] No, you're probably right. Still, I don't wanna get rid of that last effect in it's current form, I like how your opponent's moves can backfire so easily, it gives your opponent hard time thinking about their next move. Instead, I'll remove the negating effect and just let it say "destroy", so that Monsters with Triggers effects still get their effects and [i]then[/i] get destroyed by the wolves. Thanks for the feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 Yay for J u d a s's Template. =D This card is rather good. But you have to worry more about Special Summons nowadays, so it's balance is perfect as it is. Since you also have to worry about keeping the Tokens alive. Plus, you can't actually recycle the effect, so once it's dead there's nothing to worry about. We need cards like this. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 Play A Legendary Ocean, summon this, activate Royal Oppression and you're laughing. On topic of the card in itself, it's a good effect, not really OP'd in any way except it's an immediate +2, but that still doesn't really make it bad at all, since it's a Tribute/1600. Personally, I like it, and like BlindMonkey said, we need more cards like this. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote] immediate +2 [/quote] [quote] it's a Tribute [/quote] So it's a +1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This Account is Unplayable Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1306176616' post='5227415'] So it's a +1. [/quote] Whoops, didn't quite think that through properly. My bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted May 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1306175645' post='5227384'] Yay for J u d a s's Template. =D This card is rather good. But you have to worry more about Special Summons nowadays, so it's balance is perfect as it is. Since you also have to worry about keeping the Tokens alive.[/quote] That's what I thought when I first made the card, but then it felt a little too strong, considering that a lot of decks, even though they're Special Summoning a lot, still rely on their Normal Summons to get the big combos off (Kageki, Dragunity Dux, Junk Synchron, Debris Dragon, the whole lot of Monarchs, who could run this themselves though). But hell, if you see cards like Reborn Tengu, you couldn't probably consider this broken, could you? [quote]Plus, you can't actually recycle the effect, so once it's dead there's nothing to worry about. We need cards like this. 10/10[/quote] Thanks for the insight, glad you like it [quote name='Hounds of Anubis' timestamp='1306176205' post='5227399'] Play A Legendary Ocean, summon this, activate Royal Oppression and you're laughing.[/quote] This could actually hurt But Oppression is limited and destroyed very easily, so it can hardly be considered a lockdown. Nice idea though [quote]On topic of the card in itself, it's a good effect, not really OP'd in any way except it's an immediate +2, but that still doesn't really make it bad at all, since it's a Tribute/1600. Personally, I like it, and like BlindMonkey said, we need more cards like this. 10/10[/quote] Plusses like a boss But, do we really need another Monarch with Tokens? Probably... Anyway, thanks for the feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garlanth Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='Spoon' timestamp='1306171828' post='5227301'] [center][IMG]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2236/hermitf.jpg[/IMG] [/center] Another card made purely for the art... still, constructive criticism appreciated, as always [/quote] how i can make a card like your? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted May 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 [quote name='kuramaker' timestamp='1306178716' post='5227485'] how i can make a card like your?[/quote] With [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/238263-hd-cards-now-in-holofoil/"]this template[/url] and Photoshop or GIMP, your prefered tool for image editing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 23, 2011 Report Share Posted May 23, 2011 that spearhead looks like Soul Edge from the Soul Calibur series well you can't destroy more than 2 cards your opponent has anyway, so i consider it balanced for the token effects epic picture, btw 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1306186622' post='5227865'] that spearhead looks like Soul Edge from the Soul Calibur series well you can't destroy more than 2 cards your opponent has anyway, so i consider it balanced for the token effects epic picture, btw 9.9/10[/quote] Epic picture sure is epic. Thanks, glad you like the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted May 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Random bump is random! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Random Duelist Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Use the Tokens to negate summons, while being 1600 hitters, or perform an Exceed Summon, so many possibilities. Note to Konami: Make this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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