JER EMY Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/925/419114.jpg[/img] my upgrade card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 inb4noattachments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JER EMY Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 i edit it ther is no attachment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [s]no attachments - ninja'd[/s] also i do have to add, not bad for a first attempt, the summoning conditions do seem a bit hard to use though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Okay for a new member and 1st card the ATK and DEF seem appropriate for the level however, try to be original with your cards, try to focus on an effect maybe you havent seen before or rarely see and create an effect from that, a simple ATK boost couldnt really compete with today's cards. For the picture I don't comment as it is unnessecary. Effect is really underpowered, you could maybe have it as ----- "During your Main Phase you can flip 1 card on the field face down. During your End Phase, if you control this face-up card, destroy 1 face down card on the field." ------ See the difference? More powerful a good option to use when faced with stronger monsters and yet still a bit original. OCG: 1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monster(s) This card gains 300 ATK for each face down card on the field. Name, the name isn't to bad, may want to change "Fire" to maybe something like "Scorch" or something, up to you really though its just opinion based. So overall not the worst I've seen for a new member but plenty of areas for improvement, look forward to seeing future cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 Alot better IMO, more powerful still could use slightly more originality, but definate improvment in all aspects of the card, OCG still needs some tweaking, but as you make cards you'll slowly grasp solid OCG, ncie name as well, also if your interested in pics, type into google : "Jazin Kay Photobucket" lots of good pics in this album, differrent types like dragons, warriors and stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JER EMY Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 THANK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [quote name='Black of Broken Hearts' timestamp='1306318265' post='5230573'] -snip- "During your Main Phase you can flip 1 card on the field face down. During your End Phase, if you control this face-up card, destroy 1 face down card on the field." -snip- [/quote] No offense, but I agree with this. We already have a beatstick Synchro (Colassal Warrior) and personally I don't think we need a type-specific version. So this effect would be WAAAAY better. All in all, I like the card, whether you're a newbie or not. 8.4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JER EMY Posted May 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/925/419114.jpg[/img] my new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 25, 2011 Report Share Posted May 25, 2011 boring for just nuking face down spells and traps I was hoping you'd give it a more continuous effect while on the field as well for Dead meteor Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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