CAD97 Posted May 27, 2011 Report Share Posted May 27, 2011 [spoiler=Divine Dragon: Lord] [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/6007/337201.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned from your hand by discarding three level four or less dragon type monsters from your hand This card's ATK is equal to the combined ATK of all the dragons you discarded. This card can attack your opponent directly. If it does, half the ATK and DEF of this card, switch it to defense position at the end of the damage step, and no other card can attack. While in defense position, this card cannot be destroyed by card effects. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Dragon Roost Island] [img]http://img861.imageshack.us/img861/6007/337201.jpg[/img] Lore: Each time a "Divine Dragon," "Earth Dragon," "Wind Dragon," "Fire Dragon," "Water Dragon," "Fire Dragon," "Light Dragon," or "Dark Dragon" is summoned, place one dragon counter on this card. For each dragon counter on this card, increase the ATK and DEF of all the afore mentioned cards by 300. If this card would be destroyed, destroy every dragon counter on this card instead. Take 300 damage for each dragon counter destroyed. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Earth Dragon: Defender] [img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/6007/337201.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the graveyard from your hand, special summon it in defense position. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fire Dragon: Attacker] [img]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/6007/337201.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the graveyard from your hand, special summon it in attack position. [/spoiler] If cards are OP, could you suggest a way to tone them down? Thanks. EDIT: Posted images of cards EDIT: Changes were made by Maha Guns' suggestions. Also toned down Divine Dragon: Lord so it was not so much of a one turn kill. (It still could, but it would much, much be harder. (The three level four monsters would have to have 3340 ATK. Yeesh)) Also added spoilers to help deal with clutter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAD97 Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Any comments? Anything you say is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 [quote name='CAD97' timestamp='1307909630' post='5278162'] Anything you say is appreciated. [/quote] h*9y987dfy7edtd78ft675\%4fgd7dty7dtwe7wyfy7y7&t\7dg8dhd8dhdi8duwd9fjd8fhwfwhatudhw8fwhrf8wfhwdfnri8fhr8fyh7ryr78etd6856%$\%^4856ESDFDYFGDC78WTGFYFUVH8E9RFUih89dy89fy7ydfhbd7fwgmadeyoulook tjrwu98t7rfghrg89fdhgf8gy3r87gy65thfudchducfh"!!$£\w42"^£!%nbxufygdwcfhf7yhw8gfuwrjg8rtuh8tjhggghgg87rgfrf6gryvgf6f geuftg7dfgdjfcbsbscuipsdfvgfdhcardsaredecentsijg988ugjir8g89uhg7fywdwfyhr78fggfugrfo8fyrigjghbutofficialcardikjg80eug89gugrammar fnujgh7ghrefireoneedssi0freifgreig90tgut9gsome0woik0fekg9gjtrworkeor0gf0fvfgjf9gjbutsdj8f9ehfgoodiguj8rt9hgr8tyhtry Sorry, I was typing up my Science Homework while posting this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAD97 Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [quote name='Ｔｈｅ ｂｌａｚｉｎｇ ＭＡＲＳ' timestamp='1307917419' post='5278572'] h*9y987dfy7edtd78ft675\%4fgd7dty7dtwe7wyfy7y7&t\7dg8dhd8dhdi8duwd9fjd8fhwfwhatudhw8fwhrf8wfhwdfnri8fhr8fyh7ryr78etd6856%$\%^4856ESDFDYFGDC78WTGFYFUVH8E9RFUih89dy89fy7ydfhbd7fwgmadeyoulook tjrwu98t7rfghrg89fdhgf8gy3r87gy65thfudchducfh"!!$£\w42"^£!%nbxufygdwcfhf7yhw8gfuwrjg8rtuh8tjhggghgg87rgfrf6gryvgf6f geuftg7dfgdjfcbsbscuipsdfvgfdhcardsaredecentsijg988ugjir8g89uhg7fywdwfyhr78fggfugrfo8fyrigjghbutofficialcardikjg80eug89gugrammar fnujgh7ghrefireoneedssi0freifgreig90tgut9gsome0woik0fekg9gjtrworkeor0gf0fvfgjf9gjbutsdj8f9ehfgoodiguj8rt9hgr8tyhtry Sorry, I was typing up my Science Homework while posting this. [/quote] Very funny. I didn't really mean ANYTHING. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Typical newbs. These cards are OPed / Overpowered. First card, the pic is bad, real bad. Even for Any Other Card. The idea of Spell is 10/10, though 500 ATK bit too OPed. Lower it to 300 3 card is OPed, it can endlessly revive which is very forbidden. Then it is Levl 4, so when it is SPecial Summoned, need a cost such as banishing card from hand for suggestion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAD97 Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1308112744' post='5284354'] Typical newbs. These cards are OPed / Overpowered. First card, the pic is bad, real bad. Even for Any Other Card. The idea of Spell is 10/10, though 500 ATK bit too OPed. Lower it to 300 3 card is OPed, it can endlessly revive which is very forbidden. Then it is Levl 4, so when it is SPecial Summoned, need a cost such as banishing card from hand for suggestion [/quote] Actually, I was going for OPed. As for pictures, Google was and never will be magic. Changes will be made on your suggestions, though. Also, 3rd and 4th card can only revive when sent to graveyard from HAND aka once, unless returned to the hand. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Yeah, and the last ? 2000 ATK is OPed. lower to 1900, useful yet balanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAD97 Posted June 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 Edited main post with most 2nd edit. Will search for a better Divine Dragon: Lord picture. Are the card effects any better, Maha Guns? EDIT: Finally. A good picture for Divine Dragon: Lord. Added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 Surely better, but actually you miss a lot part at OCG there. 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAD97 Posted June 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 @Maha Guns, Could you point out the OCG errors? If you would, I would appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorNiro Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1308112744' post='5284354'] Typical newbs. These cards are OPed / Overpowered. First card, the pic is bad, real bad. Even for Any Other Card. The idea of Spell is 10/10, though 500 ATK bit too OPed. Lower it to 300 3 card is OPed, it can endlessly revive which is very forbidden. Then it is Levl 4, so when it is SPecial Summoned, need a cost such as banishing card from hand for suggestion [/quote] Very True Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote]Each time a "Divine Dragon," "Earth Dragon," "Wind Dragon," "Fire Dragon," "Water Dragon," "Fire Dragon," "Light Dragon," or "Dark Dragon" is summoned, place one dragon counter on this card. For each dragon counter on this card, increase the ATK and DEF of all the afore mentioned cards by 300. If this card would be destroyed, destroy every dragon counter on this card instead. [b]Take 300 damage for each dragon counter destroyed.[/b][/quote] It's a Field Spell, so who takes the 300x damage? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAD97 Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='MBArceus' timestamp='1308483866' post='5294815'] It's a Field Spell, so who takes the 300x damage? [/quote] Hmm, didn't think about that. I mean the controller loses the life points. I will edit it to make it more obvious. Someday. Soon? Possibly. Late? Possibly. I'll do it eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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