Valkyrus Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 it might be OP'ed but what the heck~ [center][IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/owy.jpg[/IMG][/center] Lore: [size="4"][center][quote]2 Rank 10 monsters. This card can also be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing a total of 10 Xyz Materials from Xyz Monsters on your side of the field. If this card is Special Summoned in this way select up to 2 Xyz Monsters from your side of the field and treat them as Xyz Materials for this card. Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to banish all cards on your opponent's side of the field. No cards or effects can be activated in response to this card's effect. If this card is attacked inflict direct damage to your opponent equal to the attacking monster's ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card has no Xyz Materials destroy it during your End Phase.[/quote][/center][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Punk Posted June 2, 2011 Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307055630' post='5249622'] [b]2 Rank 10 monsters.[/b] This card can also be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing a total of 10 Xyz Materials from Xyz Monsters on your side of the field. If this card is Special Summoned in this way select up to 2 Xyz Monsters from your side of the field and treat them as Xyz Materials for this card. Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to banish all cards on your opponent's side of the field. No cards or effects can be activated in response to this card's effect. If this card is attacked inflict direct damage to your opponent equal to the attacking monster's ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card has no Xyz Materials destroy it during your End Phase. [/quote] Did you mean Level? Or does it actually require Xyz monsters? It's not going to hit the field very often, since it need 2 [s]Level[/s] Rank 10 Xyz monsters (or 10 Xyz Material Monsters, and 2 other Xyz in order to be effective), but when it does, it's extremely OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2011 [quote name='Daft Punk' timestamp='1307055850' post='5249627'] Did you mean Level? Or does it actually require Xyz monsters? It's not going to hit the field very often, since it need 2 [s]Level[/s] Rank 10 Xyz monsters (or 10 Xyz Material Monsters, and 2 other Xyz in order to be effective), but when it does, it's extremely OP'd. [/quote] well yes, but it's hard to get this out. VERY hard. And even when you do, if you nuke your opponent's field, still the only way to deal damage is to attack with another monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chain Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Have to say this now, but the card looks amazing. The picture is very nice to the eyes, and the template is pretty sexy too. Everything else is pretty cool, its and trump card if every summoned. High rating/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 given how hard it is just to get it on the field, its effects are almost UPed I'd banish your spells AND traps on your opponent's side of the field very impressive pic, where'd you get it? 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 [quote name='Chain' timestamp='1307068021' post='5250037'] Have to say this now, but the card looks amazing. The picture is very nice to the eyes, and the template is pretty sexy too.Everything else is pretty cool, its and trump card if every summoned.High rating/10 [/quote] thank you :"D [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307088582' post='5250550'] given how hard it is just to get it on the field, its effects are almost UPedI'd banish your spells AND traps on your opponent's side of the fieldvery impressive pic, where'd you get it?9.3/10 [/quote] I'm not sure what you mean, you probably misread it since this card lets you banish ALL cards on your opponent's side of the field including monsters, traps, spells~ The picture I got from Danbooru (you gotta know how to get around the porn on there to find pictures like that still.It's very NSFW ), but I've edited it a lot too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 I'd lower the optional SS effect a bit. Unless you're using Terrabyte, you'd need a full field of unused Exceed monsters to pull this out that way. With Terrabyte, you'd need 2 of him and 2 other unused monsters. Make it a bit easier to summon and maybe a halved battle damage for your monsters during the turn you use it's effect (depending on how much easier to summon you make it) and it would be fine. Also, I think the correct OCG is to "detach" Xyz material monsters, not remove them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 [font="Comic Sans MS"][center][color="#8B0000"][b]Pic is Fantastic. Template is Baws. I don't know much (truthfully barely anything at all) About XYZ's/Exceeds but effect is Great. Well balanced. OCG is near flawless but off a bit. OCG Fix:[/b][/color] [center]This card can also be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing a total of 10 Xyz Materials from Xyz Monsters on your side of the field. If this card is Special Summoned in this way select up to 2 Xyz Monsters from your side of the field and treat them as Xyz Materials for this card. Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to banish all cards on your [color=red]O[/color]pponent's side of the field. No cards or effects can be activated in response to this card's effect. If this card is attacked inflict [color=red]D[/color]irect [color=red]D[/color]amage to your [color=red]O[/color]pponent equal to the attacking monster's ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card has no Xyz Materials destroy it during your End Phase.[/center] [color="#8B0000"][b]Fixes in Red. Just some capitalization errors. 9.6/10[/b][/color][/center][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1307117509' post='5251093'] I'd lower the optional SS effect a bit. Unless you're using Terrabyte, you'd need a full field of unused Exceed monsters to pull this out that way. With Terrabyte, you'd need 2 of him and 2 other unused monsters. Make it a bit easier to summon and maybe a halved battle damage for your monsters during the turn you use it's effect (depending on how much easier to summon you make it) and it would be fine.Also, I think the correct OCG is to "detach" Xyz material monsters, not remove them. [/quote] Not neccessarily. Some Exceeds/Xyzs have more than 2 Xyz Materials, and I've personally made Xyz monsters with up to 5 Xyz Materials each that are not hard to summon at all. Also I know about detach, but that's usually/only used when it activates an effect in the belonging Xyz monster. In this case you remove Xyz Materials not to activate the belonging monster's effect, but another monster's. So..I'm not sure anyways. [quote name='Classic' timestamp='1307117987' post='5251108'] [font="Comic Sans MS"][center][color="#8B0000"][b]Pic is Fantastic. Template is Baws. I don't know much (truthfully barely anything at all) About XYZ's/Exceeds but effect is Great. Well balanced. OCG is near flawless but off a bit. OCG Fix:[/b][/color][center]This card can also be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by removing a total of 10 Xyz Materials from Xyz Monsters on your side of the field.If this card is Special Summoned in this way select up to 2 Xyz Monsters from your side of the field and treat them as Xyz Materials for this card. Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to banish all cards on your [color=red]O[/color]pponent's side of the field. No cards or effects can be activated in response to this card's effect. If this card is attacked inflict [color=red]D[/color]irect [color=red]D[/color]amage to your [color=red]O[/color]pponent equal to the attacking monster's ATK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card has no Xyz Materials destroy it during your End Phase.[/center][color="#8B0000"][b]Fixes in Red. Just some capitalization errors.9.6/10[/b][/color][/center][/font] [/quote] thanks for the fixes ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Random Duelist Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 Awesome pic. Can't be destroyed by battle but still burns for cards like Mist Valley Soldier, Mainspring Juggler,... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307118568' post='5251128'] Not neccessarily. Some Exceeds/Xyzs have more than 2 Xyz Materials, and I've personally made Xyz monsters with up to 5 Xyz Materials each that are not hard to summon at all. Also I know about detach, but that's usually/only used when it activates an effect in the belonging Xyz monster. In this case you remove Xyz Materials not to activate the belonging monster's effect, but another monster's. So..I'm not sure anyways. [/quote] I was going off of the ones that actually exist, and if you've made exceeds that require 5 materials and are relatively easy to get out, you can disregard that bit. But I also used Terrabyte as an example, so I know some Xyz's use more that two materials. And I'd still use detach, but that's me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
master foskia Posted June 3, 2011 Report Share Posted June 3, 2011 just a little difficult to be played, but it's wonderful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Resident Fascist Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 [color="#FF8C00"][size="4"][font="Arial"]"Exceed Network Open! Booster Drive Rank 10! Stars Scattered Across the exceed Network, become a Magic Caster that Banishes all! Booster Drive on! Booster Drive XYZ Summon! Come On! Omnipotent Witch, Yra!"[/font][/size][/color] OT: Card isn't [i]THAT[/i] Overpowered. It's not bad, but it's no CED-EOTE in terms of brokenness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 [quote name='Invalid Arguement' timestamp='1307184158' post='5253409'] [color="#FF8C00"][size="4"][font="Arial"]"Exceed Network Open! Booster Drive Rank 10! Stars Scattered Across the exceed Network, become a Magic Caster that Banishes all! Booster Drive on! Booster Drive XYZ Summon! Come On! Omnipotent Witch, Yra!"[/font][/size][/color] OT: Card isn't [i]THAT[/i] Overpowered. It's not bad, but it's no CED-EOTE in terms of brokenness. [/quote] thank...you...though I have no idea what that abbreviation(?) means D": Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 [quote name='Gandorator' timestamp='1307192361' post='5253501'] thank...you...though I have no idea what that abbreviation(?) means D": [/quote] Chaos Emperor Dragon - Envoy Of The End. AKA: Hell in one card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 Very nice. May I ask where you got the template? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clark14 Posted June 4, 2011 Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 how did you make a exeed/XYZ monster? in the card color? It is a great card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted June 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2011 [quote name='Invalid Arguement' timestamp='1307196086' post='5253604'] Chaos Emperor Dragon - Envoy Of The End.AKA: Hell in one card. [/quote] *reads his effect* That's like a pumped up Gandora.. anyways, I think my monster is slightly more useful even if it's way harder to summon. [quote name='ArchmageCarn' timestamp='1307199102' post='5253712'] Very nice. May I ask where you got the template? [/quote] I downloaded the original template and made the Xyz background myself. [quote name='clark14' timestamp='1307201916' post='5253820'] how did you make a exeed/XYZ monster? in the card color?It is a great card [/quote] ^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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