-Unknown- Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 [center] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/iqy2b6.jpg[/IMG] [b]Lore:[/b] [i]This card is also treated as a Pyro-Type monster. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, inflict 200x the Level of the destroyed monster to your opponent. If this card is destroyed by a Monster Card's Effect, destroy all cards on the field and inflict 400 for each card destroyed by this card's effect to your opponent.[/i] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 1) Pic + Name: Hmm...not too bad...but a tad plain, don't you think? Give it a name perhaps? Either way, I can tell you the image is good. Your total for this is 8/10. 2) Card Balance/Playability: Well, it's effect is pretty strong for a Level 7...I think make it 8. I would limit the final destruction effect for only monsters. Otherwise this card would definately make an essencial boss card in burn decks. This and [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Room_of_Nightmare"]Dark Room of Nightmare[/url] would work greatly. Also, even if this card was destroyed by battle, just [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Backfire"]Backfire[/url] it on your opponent. However, because of this and its High ATK + Powerful effect, I would limit the destruction to monster's only. Your total for this is 9/10. 3) Originality: Yes, it's original. Never seen a card like this. It's a hardcore burning machine. Definately would like it published if it could. Your total for this is 1/1. 4) OCG: I see no flaws. Your total for this is 1/1. 5) Card Maker Expertise: Well, you've used the Set ID efficiently. I disagree with the name, making it -Unknown-, I'd rather see it with your name. The serial number... . Your total for this one is 6/10. Now, tallying up your total and dividing it by 5... [font="Arial Black"][u][b][center]8.6/10[/center][/b][/u][/font] Be proud, you did good. Not good enough for a rep though, try improving the highlighted areas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatMachine Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Too easy to summon, and too much damage dealt for a revenge shot, maybe make it 200X each card to both player's. I can easily see cheap shots such as "Raigeki Break" then (if the entire field is filled except the place Raigeki Break was and where Inferno Dragon was) you can inflict a potential 7600 points of damage, which is kinda messed up. Overal: 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 2nd burn effect is too much I can see this easily burning over the 2000 mark in that aspect it's even worse than Chaos Emperor Dragon's burn 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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