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Gredas0927

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These are my first cards I have ever made. By the way I didn't find a nice picture of little Jaden Yuki :(



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No these are not good. The pics are bad. The effects are unoriginal and boring. There are OCG/Spelling mistakes. I get that you are new so, I am going to help you out.


[b]Jaden Yuki LV3[/b]
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During your Standby Phase, by sending t[b]h[/b]is face-up card to the [b]G[/b]raveyard, Special Summon 1 "Jaden Yuki LV5" from your hand or Deck.

[i]This card's effect is expected in low leveled LV monsters so I won't say to much, but you could add another effect in that could add some excitement from this card.[/i]
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[b]Jaden Yuki LV5[/b]
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During your Main Phase 1 you can [b]Special S[/b]ummon 1 "Elemental Hero" monster from your Deck. You can Tribute this card to [b]Special S[/b]ummon 1 "Jaden Yuki LV7."

[i]This card is WAY overpowered. I mean you can Special Summon any Elemental Hero monster from your Deck. So as soon as I get this guy out I can also get a Bladedge or a Neos out right away. Not to mention right after I do that I can just get rid of this guy to bring out a stronger version of him(A.K.A. Jaden Yuki LV7). You also didn't specify where you Summoned the "Jaden Yuki LV7" from. It could be hand, Deck, or Graveyard making this card UBERLY overpowered.[/i]
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Keep working at this. It takes time to get good at making cards. I hope my suggestions helped. Sorry if I seemed a bit harsh, but I am just trying to help you improve on your card making skills.
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