micaelfur Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 Sorry If It Sucks And There accidentally Might Be Two Of a Card, [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img855.imageshack.us/img855/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/2065/421793i.jpg[/img][img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/3382/421793t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/1054/421793u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/7232/421793m.jpg[/img][img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4870/421793.jpg[/img] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4870/421793.jpg[/img][img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1734/421793o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/4870/421793.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 It isn't too bad for a new guy. Here are a couple of tips: 1) "Don't Write Like This" when doing effects/lore, "write in contnous prose (normally)" 2) Learn some key words in Yu-gi-oh. For Flame Fusion, you'll need to say 'Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a "Flame Beast" Fusion Monster Card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that monster from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.)' Any monster using this mechanism should have 'This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by "Flame Fusion".' 3) I saw Rexmax's picture. It's already a Yu-gi-oh monster, from the Jurrac Series. Don't use already made card's pictures. 4) Some cards are overpowered such as Ultimate Flame Destruction. You need to balance cards out. Hope this helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 These are kinda silly. Especially Sizrian. Here is the wording for the Spell and Trap Cards. Fire Realm: [quote]All "Flamed Beast" monsters gain 500 ATK.[/quote] "Molten Destruction", but more specific and without the DEF drop. Not stunning. Escorted by the Flames: [quote]Activate only when your opponent declares an attack on a "Flamed Beast" monster. Banish the attacking monster.[/quote] New terms! Also, Dimensional Prison is better, but it might be viable to run three of them and three of this. Flame Fusion: [quote]Send Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a "Flamed Beast" Fusion Monster Card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon).[/quote] Polymerization isn't very good. This won't do. The Flamed Eye: [quote]Equip to a "Flamed Beast" monster. It gains 700 ATK.[/quote] Malevolent Nuzzler is better. Axe of Despair is better. United We Stand is far better. Add another effect to this if you can. Flamed Banner: [quote]All "Flamed Beast" monsters gain 200 ATK during the Battle Phase only.[/quote] Not the worst card. Semi-original, but not really useful. Flamed Ring: [quote]Equip to a "Flamed Beast" monster. It cannot be destroyed by battle. (Battle Damage is calculated normally.)[/quote] Mist Body is better. Again, add another effect to make it viable. Sakeretsu Dragon: [quote]Activate only when your opponent declares an attack on a "Flamed Beast" monster. The attacking monster loses 1000 ATK until the End Phase.[/quote] "Sakuretsu". Also, Shrink is better. Ultimate Flame Destruction: [quote]Discard all cards in your hand and destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls.[/quote] This is a more expensive Lightning Vortex. It goes well with Dark World, since the discard isn't a cost. There are lots of Normal Monsters in this set, none of which have much purpose. Flame Beast the Lost Knight has too much ATK. If you want a Level 4 monster to have 2000 ATK, give it either a weakness or no effect. This set has good aspects, but it is flawed. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
micaelfur Posted June 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 Thanks For The Comments And The Suggestions It Really Helps Me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saros the judmengt Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5186/426617.jpg[/img[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5186/426617.jpg[/img[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5186/426617.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='saros the judmengt' timestamp='1307666620' post='5270470'] [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5186/426617.jpg[/img[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5186/426617.jpg[/img[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [/quote] What are you doing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [quote name='saros the judmengt' timestamp='1307666620' post='5270470'] [img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5186/426617.jpg[/img[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5186/426617.jpg[/img[img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/5186/426617.jpg[/img][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5186/426617.jpg[/img] [/quote] Please do not post your cards in other peoples threads. It is rude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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