Lunar Origins Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 [center][b]This becomes a game of LOW ATK!!! [img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/522/388131.jpg[/img] LORE: 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters All monsters on the field, except this card, lose 200 ATK x their own Level or 400 ATK x its Rank. If a monsters ATK reaches 0 due to this effect, return it to its owners hand. The 400 x for rank is for Exceeds (which I dislike).[/b] And for a tuner? [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/522/388131.jpg[/img] [b] LORE When this card is Summoned, you can send one card from your hand to the Graveyard. If you do, your opponent cannot activate Spells and Traps until their next end phase, and all monsters on the field lose 200 ATK and DEF x their own level.[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 Personally, I think it rocks. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1307653435' post='5270078'] Personally, I think it rocks. 10/10 [/quote] Thanks Kyng! First time I've gotten a ten. I was thinking of raising its rank, but then again... A four is a bit awkward to get out, so I kept it.Added a Tuner for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Manpole Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 The "Green Serpent Witch" has a useful effect (although I do not know what Exceeds or their rankings are =p), but I still think she could use a slight ATK and/or DEF boost. (I'm really liking the pic btw) - Also her type is Earth, and it might be more suited to be a Water type, idk. As for your tuner.... When this card is Summoned, you can send one card from your hand to the Graveyard. If you do, your opponent cannot activate [b]S[/b]pells [b]or[/b] [b]T[/b]raps until their next[b] E[/b]nd [b]P[/b]hase, and all monsters on the field lose 200 ATK and DEF x their own level. I would say that it being a tuner, with both of those effects... it seems a bit much. Instead of losing 200ATK and DEF x their own level permanently... it could be until she is destroyed, Or it could be 300ATK and DEF permanently or 100 ATK and DEF x their own level permanently Anyways, I like them both, but think that "Green Hunter Vine's" second effect is a bit much for being so easy to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 [quote name='Manpole' timestamp='1307661474' post='5270316'] The "Green Serpent Witch" has a useful effect (although I do not know what Exceeds or their rankings are =p), but I still think she could use a slight ATK and/or DEF boost. (I'm really liking the pic btw) - Also her type is Earth, and it might be more suited to be a Water type, idk. As for your tuner.... When this card is Summoned, you can send one card from your hand to the Graveyard. If you do, your opponent cannot activate [b]S[/b]pells [b]or[/b] [b]T[/b]raps until their next[b] E[/b]nd [b]P[/b]hase, and all monsters on the field lose 200 ATK and DEF x their own level. I would say that it being a tuner, with both of those effects... it seems a bit much. Instead of losing 200ATK and DEF x their own level permanently... it could be until she is destroyed, Or it could be 300ATK and DEF permanently or 100 ATK and DEF x their own level permanently Anyways, I like them both, but think that "Green Hunter Vine's" second effect is a bit much for being so easy to use. [/quote] Yeah, Green Hunter is OP; I might make it just 100 ATK and DEF. I made it "Earth" because... well, I thought earth was pretty cool. As for the pic... I just picked a random picture and made a card based a card around it. The original ATK was 2100, but I thought, with her effect and level, it would be way too OP. Thank you for your rating and correction! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
電源戦争ウルフ Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 These are really cool. I really like the synchro. If these were real, i would use them because i use a plant beatdown deck and these would work perfectly. 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Level, Rank, Spell and Trap also capitalized. The idea is decent, and not bad at all. Though it is not that Good, but since you new. This is considered to Great. The Tuner which include Cold Wave effect seems OPed, but im not sure. Still good though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 1st card you forgot to say when it's synchro summoned successfully, that's when the monsters lose atk (or did you mean as long as it's on the field, when a monster is summoned that effect will trigger) 2nd card has a little bit of Ancient Gear effects thrown in, which is good as well, I like it 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [s]PORN, A LOT A LOT OF PORN![/s] Anti-exceeds? Interesting... If Exceeds rise to the metagame, here's a card to use. This card's actually good against a Swarmer or somethin'. The pictures, on the other hand, are rather remarkable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1307704551' post='5271447'] 1st card you forgot to say when it's synchro summoned successfully, that's when the monsters lose atk (or did you mean as long as it's on the field, when a monster is summoned that effect will trigger) 2nd card has a little bit of Ancient Gear effects thrown in, which is good as well, I like it 9.4/10 [/quote] It is continuous, so as long as it is on the field it keeps em low. Thanks for the rating, I wanted to make the second one kind of but-not-so similar to the gears, whom I love dearly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
j3tears Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 nice cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Hey, you do realize the second can be abused with Dark Worlds, right? Why not change it to Banishing it? Also, its effect seems way too OP, even in this meta. Should make it be only Traps. Right now, not gonna rate it. The first one seems pretty fine, if not extremely nice. I love it. 10/10. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [quote name='Darkplant - PAIN' timestamp='1307798249' post='5274165'] Hey, you do realize the second can be abused with Dark Worlds, right? Why not change it to Banishing it? Also, its effect seems way too OP, even in this meta. Should make it be only Traps. Right now, not gonna rate it. The first one seems pretty fine, if not extremely nice. I love it. 10/10. Nice job. [/quote] Yeah, it does seem very abusable. I wanted to make it protect the Synchro so it isn't destroyed as soon as it is summoned. And... wow, it can be abused by DW! Didn't even think of that while making it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 If you want to make it so, why not make it like this? "When this card is used as the Synchro Material of "Green Serpent Witch", Banish card from your hand. If you do, your opponent cannot activate Spells and Traps until their next end phase, and all monsters on the field lose 200 ATK and DEF x their own level. [b]You cannot activate this effect during a turn in which you Special Summoned a monster except "Green Serpent Witch".[/b]" That's to stope Lonefire + Fluff Token abuse. Get it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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