Manpole Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 [center]A lot of these older cards of mine have gone through changes in their effects and their ATK/DEF points to fix their UP, and often OP states. Also, I have added 2 new cards to my old "Elf" set here. So... Look, enjoy, rate. Any comments and criticism is both welcomed and appreciated!! Thanks. Edit: I've added 6 NEW cards, seperated in their own category at the moment, and made slight changes to... -Dark Elven Prince -Elf Scout -Elven Forester -Elven Warlock -The Kind Forest Hope you like them! [/center] [spoiler='[b]Monsters[/b]'] [spoiler='Battle Elf'][img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Hunter Drow'][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: While face-up on the field, this card is treated as a "Dark Elf" monster. Every time this card destroys an opponents monster by battle, your opponent must discard 1 card from their hand. If this monster would be destroyed by battle, you can instead destroy another face-up monster on your side of the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Dark Elf Queen'][img]http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: Every time this card destroys an opponents monster by battle, this card can either gain 200 ATK or you can destroy 1 card in your opponents Spell and Trap card zone. If this card would be destroyed, you can instead destroy another face-up monster on your side of the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Dark Elven Prince'][img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/1256/135252q.jpg[/img] Effect: If you activate a Spell card on your Main Phase 1, your opponent cannot Normal Summon a monster on their next turn. If this monster would be destroyed by battle, you can instead destroy another face-up monster on your side of the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Elf Goddess Syriel'][img]http://img857.imageshack.us/img857/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elf King'][img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, select 1 card from their Spell and Trap card zone. Your opponent shows you the card then returns it to their hand. The selected card cannot be played while "Elf King" is on the Field. This card gains 100 ATK for every Spell or Trap card on your side of the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Elf Scout'][img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elf Sorcerer Gladus'][img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6523/135252s.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elven Archer'][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elven Forester'][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1494/135252m.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elven Mage'][img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: Every time a Spell card is used, inflict 300 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. Once per turn, while this card is face-up on the field you can negate the activation of an opponent's Spell card, and return it to their hand, that Spell card cannot be used again this turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Elven Warlock'] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4898/135252x.jpg[/img] Effect: This card can be Special Summoned to the field by tributing 1 face-up "Elf" or "Elven" monster you control. Whenever you activate a Spell card, you can change its effect to - "Destroy 1 card in your opponents Spell and Trap card zone, and inflict 400 points of direct damage to their Life Points."[/spoiler] [spoiler='Elven Warrior'][img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Mounted Elf Knight'][img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9499/135252a.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='The Kind Forest'] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, it is changed to defense position. Once per opponent's turn you may activate one of these effects: 1 - If another monster on your side of the field would be attacked, you may change the attack to this card. 2 - During your opponents Main Phase, increase your Life Points by 400.[/spoiler] [spoiler='The Mad Forest'][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/7766/135252t.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='The Magic Forest'][img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Witch Elf'][img]http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: Discard 1 card from your hand to activate this cards effect. Select 1 face-down card in your opponents Spell and Trap card zone, or 1 card from their hand. If the selected card is a Trap, return it to its original position. If the selected card is a Spell card, activate it, and change its effect to - "Deal 700 points of direct damage to the owner of this card."[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='[b]Spell Cards[/b]'] [spoiler='Ambush'][img]http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/6523/135252s.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elven Alliance'][img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elven Temple'][img]http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Elvish Pact'][img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/5965/135252e.jpg[/img] Effect: Activate this card when you control an "Elf" or "Elven" monster. Place 3 Spell counters on this card. Add 1 Spell counter to this card when a monster is successfully Summoned to your side of the field. If your opponent controls more monsters than you do, your opponent's monsters cannot attack. Remove 1 Spell counter from this card at each of your End Phases. This card is destroyed when there are no Spell counters on it.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Rose Sword'][img]http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Sanctuary'][img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/5817/135252k.jpg[/img] Effect: Each time a monster on your side of the field is destroyed, place 2 Spell counters on this card. You may remove 1 Spell counter from this card to negate the activation of a Spell card used from your opponents hand and return it to their hand, that Spell card cannot be used again until your opponent's next turn. You may remove Spell counters from this card to Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard with a level less than or equal to the amount removed.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spell Return'][img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/9663/135252j.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='[b]Trap Cards[/b]'] [spoiler='Captured Reflection'][img]http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: Special Summon this card to your side of the field and treat it as a monster card with the same Name, Type, Attribute, Effect, ATK, and DEF as an opponents monster; and place it in the same battle position as the opponents monster. This card cannot change battle position, attack or be tributed for a Tribute Summon. Whenever the opponents selected monster changes battle position, so does this card; whenever the opponents selected monster attacks, you can choose an Attack Target for this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Growing Barrier'][img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/9722/135252.jpg[/img] Effect: When this card is activated, place 1 Spell Counter on this card. Place 1 Spell counter on this card at each of your Standby Phases. For each Spell Counter on this card, select 1 space in your opponents Spell and Trap card zone; return any card in that zone to their hand and the selected zone(s) cannot be used as long as this card remains face-up on the field. When this card has 5 Spell counters, destroy this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Searching'][img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='New Cards, Added After Post!!'] [spoiler='Beast Slayer'][img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/7823/135252n.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Dark Magic Bind'][img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2184/135252p.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Enchanted Plate'][img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Future Sight'][img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9876/135252v.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='High Elf Guard'][img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler='Magic Burn'][img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9722/135252.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [/spoiler] Now, before you comment on "Elven Warlock", please take into consideration that yes, I do know he is from WoW, and yes I know he has no background. I was having trouble finding a picture for that card and thought he suited it (for now). Please do not comment on that cards picture, I know it could use a change. Thanks. (picture replaced, but yes... it is again from WoW, but a much better picture!) Edit: Should "Dark Elf" (now "Hunter Drow") be kept as "Hunter Drow"? or should his name be changed back to a "Dark Elf", such as "Dark Elf Warrior", etc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunar Origins Posted June 9, 2011 Report Share Posted June 9, 2011 OH GOD, that is a lot of cards. Give me time to read, and I'll rate em all. So far they look pretty good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Bumpable bump, if anybody can comment on even a single card would be nice. Haven't gotten any feedback yet =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Forester is OPed, you should lower it from 1000 atk to like 500 atk for Dark Elvin Prince's last effect in negating its own destruction, that should be limited to once per turn overall the set is relatively balanced, so I'll give it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Foresters effect did not apply to himself, not sure if that is why you thought it was OP. I added a line to his effect to clear that up. - If he still seems like he could be OP, I could lower his ATK gain to 500, but would then have to at least increase his base ATK by 500 (or possibly 700). As for Dark Elven Prince, keep in mind that his effect can only protect him if he would be destroyed by battle. But, even though that is the case I can understand why he might be a little OP, so I changed his first effect so that it only activates if you activate a Spell card on your Main Phase 1. I've added and edited a few more cards! Checking those ones out would be cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Bump. I'm really liking this set... anybody else want to tell me what they think of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 Dark Elf is already a card: [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Elf"]Dark Elf[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Alright, I'll have to change his name then... anything else you can add to that response? lol, suggestions/input from people is always appreciated ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 hmm...more variety? Use spell counters or geminis...anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Well... the effects had quite some variety (IMO), although a lot of them dealt with Spell cards. Do you mean I need different types of cards to add to the set? Like Synchros/Fusions, and as you said Gemini. A few of the cards I had (3-4 of them) did deal with Spell counters. Anyways, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Dark Elf Fix Call it Drow (A dark elf) and have it treated as an elf. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Good idea (I didn't know dark elves had a seperate name), but Drow alone doesnt sound so great to me. How about "Hunter Drow", or "Warrior Drow" ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Bump... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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