Altαir Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 [center][font="Courier New"]I need some help on fixing the OCG on this, I've been away for a while and it doesn't come to me as well. And the new problem solving OCG is confusing me a bit as well.[/font] [img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9633/85151.jpg[/img] [font="Courier New"]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can discard 1 card, other than this card, to discard this card from your hand. If this card is in your Graveyard and there are 3 or more cards on top of this card, you can Special Summon it. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, it cannot be the target for an attack. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to add 1 Trap Card in your Graveyard to your Deck. By sending this card to the Graveyard, your opponent must skip his/her next Battle Phase. [img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9633/85151.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can pay 500 Life Points to discard this card from your hand. If this card is in your Graveyard and there are 4 or more cards on top of this card, you can Special Summon this card. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, your opponent loses 500 Life Points. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 card on the field. You cannot attack the turn this effect is activated. Please, do Comment and Rate. I would love improvements for this card as well (it seems OP to me).[/font][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
momobeast Posted June 10, 2011 Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 wierd but effective 8/10 kind of confusing but I got it on the first time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2011 It's supposed to be part of a set where cards are required to have a specific amount of cards on top of them in the Graveyard for their effects to activate. It's definitely something weird, but can result in massive swarming and effects after mass discarding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Any more suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 for Flame, "Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to destroy 2 cards on the field. You cannot attack the turn this effect is activated" <---don't destroy 2 cards, make it 1 for 1. Either destroy 1 card for 1 card discard, or discard 2 cards for 2 cards destroyed 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Thanks, I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 oh right, sorry I overlooked for the 1st card type, it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Oh, okay. Thanks for the fixes. Are there any OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 I don't bother looking at the OCG, that I leave to others in the thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Cards look good. They are very original. The pics are amazing and look like they would belong in an archtype. Like I said they are original and I have seen very few cards like this. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can discard 3 cards to discard this card from your hand. If this card is in your Graveyard and there are 3 or more cards on top of this card, you can Special Summon it. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to add 1 Trap Card in your Graveyard to your Deck. By sending this card to the Graveyard, your opponent must skip his/her next Battle Phase.[b] --> Discard 3 cards other than this card itself seems too many, if you use new OCG so selected as an target is replaced by targeted for an attack[/b] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. You can pay 500 Life Points to discard this card from your hand. If this card is in your Graveyard and there are 4 or more cards on top of this card, you can Special Summon this card. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, your opponent loses 500 Life Points. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 card on the field. You cannot attack the turn this effect is activated.--> This one firstly seems OP but actually balanced, 8.8/10 Overall cards have very nice SS idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Ah, okay, thanks a lot. It seems a lot, the discard effect, now that I look at it again. I'll change that. You think these cards could be an Archtype? I'll see if I can pull it off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 it could work, but we'd have to see the other cards first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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