Simping For Hina Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 [center][img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/162/6/b/jump___michael_jordan_tag_by_deathfiendofmagic-d3imtxe.png[/img] Cnc. And help with lighting and flow.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted June 11, 2011 Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 It's pretty hard to see the focal and the lighting is everywhere. Not much flow either. imo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2011 Thanks for pointing out the obvious ^^. I did say I needed help with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Safe to say this is your best piece to date. The atmo is rather well done i must say. The effects are amateurly placed, although they aren't too hefty which shows some professionalism. Lighting/flow/depth although not shown clearly, are still there. I rather like the piece. Well done, KIU. I look forward to working with you after finals are over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Thank you NW! That means a lot. Of course it might be a bit amateurish, that is because I just read some tutorials. I am surprised by the atmosphere, i didn't know it was good. Effects, I was trying to see what looked good where, and this was the best spot IMO. And those are what my issues are! Glad you like it and i shall. Hope to learn well from you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Agree with Nightwalker here. Lighting, depth and flow need a bit of work. Atmosphere is extremely good in my opinion. The focal's a little hard to see and I think the bubble C4D behind the head is distracting. But I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Why not get some other FB? Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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