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lvl1hero Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 okay uhm... since you said you're new... i'll give a normal rating if you dont mind... [u]OCG[/u] = [b]Needs to be Fixed[/b] ([u]optional[/u]) (maybe you can look at some real cards for guides? of course, you dont need to change it if you dont want your card to look legit) [u]Images[/u] = Great (not bad, some cards look great!) [u]Comments[/u]: [b]Marine Dragon[/b] is my favorite... that card alone i give it a [b]5/5[/b]... but it is kinda OP (over-powered) and could use a bit of fixing... like maybe lowering its ATK and DEF a little but eh... its not too bad right now... ... and the OCG (original card grammer) should be changed to this (if you want, dont have to): [quote][b]Marine Dragon[/b] --- [b]Lv8 Drgaon / Water / Effect Monster[/b] --- [b]2800[/b]ATK/[b]3000[/b]DEF ([u]everything stayed the same[/u])[quote]This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap Cards.[/quote][/quote]... this would mean that you can't [b]Monster Reborn[/b] or [b]Call of the Huanted[/b] back [b]Marine Dragon[/b] right?... [b]Blood Thirsty Amazon[/b] is [u]broken[/u] (meaning its too strong/cheap/whatever you wanna call it)... she's only a Lv5 monster with 2500ATK with no drawback... no weakness... or nothing to make it balance out for being such a strong card with that much attack... ... if you wanna keep her at lv5 you'll have to lower its attack to at least 2300ATK... or raise her level to lv6 but give her less than like 1300DEF... (yeah, realistic cards are tough) i like this card... but [b]Peace Warrior[/b] will have to be lv5 (at least 1 tribute) if you want to keep his effect... otherwise it'd be kinda broken for a Lv4 monster.... =t [b]League of Warriors[/b] can't be a [u]Continuous Trap card[/u] unless it costs you something to keep it on the field every turn (like Life Points or something)... ... [b]White Libra Dragon[/b] is fine... but i already know some people will rank on it for being useless... ... but dont listen to em... unless i mean... you wanna hear the truth and real feebacks... ... i laughed at [b]Magician of Love[/b] hahaha... because you repeated Magic and Spells on its effect when those two are really the same thing... ... but again... your cards need a major OCG fixing for a good rating and to receive the kind of feedback you wanna hear... ... besides the Ritual Spell card... the rest of the cards are kinda OP... and could use a good editing to make them more reasonable and balanced... ... but i'll let you figure that out... [u]Overall Rating[/u] = 6.5/10 ... this is pretty good... you're getting there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 I think I already replied to this topic, but I'm gonna say it again.... Sorcerer of Light Magic is still too powerful. Try something more along the lines of 300 ATK per Light Monster besides 1000, because then it wouldn't be so overpowering. [quote] This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each "Lightsworn" monster with a different name in your Graveyard. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. During each of your End Phases, send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. [/quote] This is "Gragonith, Lightsworn Dragon's" effect. I figured you should know this card already. This card is Level 6 and has 2000 ATK. Now, if I have EVERY Lightsworn Monster known to man in my Graveyard, this card might only have a cap of about 4500 Attack. How you have your Sorcerer of Light Magic, if EVERY Lightsworn Monster existed in my Graveyard, your monster would have over 18000 attack (maybe more, I am just guessing). It is near-impossible to achieve that kind of attack power (And believe me, I've seen some Evil Hero Dark Gaia's get all the way up there, close to 10000). Consider revamping the ATK bonus on that card. You still have to specify whether Damage Calculation still applies on a monster that can't be destroyed in battle. Amazon would read something like this: [quote] This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Damage Calculation still applies. [/quote] What kind of effect are you explaining with Emperor Jade Dragon? Are you saying that when it is destroyed in battle, that another face-up monster you control gets the 2000 ATK bonus? If so, then it should read something like this: [quote] This card cannot be the target of either you or your opponent's card effects. When this monster is destroyed in battle, select one face-up monster you control. It gains 2000 ATK until the End Phase of this turn. [/quote] When you revamp those cards, I might think about reviewing, but I think I can wait until then. 5/10 so far, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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