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    • 2/5 - You "might" have potential.
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    • 3/5 - Average. Not too bad, not too great.
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    • 4/5 - Great. Keep up the good work.
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    • 5/5 - Awesomeness. Why didn't Konami think of this?
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Not-so-Radiant Arin

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Strike of the Heavens revolves around the new Archetype known as "Daedalus Warrior" Monsters. Protectors of truth and justice, they swear upon their swords and strike down evil. The ace card of this set is the "Daedalus Warrior Empyrean Valkyrie", a direct descendant from the plane of heaven who judges evil and is sworn to uphold the law.

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Upon activation, select 1 Level 4 or lower "Daedalus Warrior" Monster on your side of the field you control. Special Summon 1 "Blood Token" with the same Stats/Attribute/Effect as the selected Monster. On your next Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 "Soul Token". On your 2nd Standby Phase after this card's activation, Special Summon 1 "Heart Token". When a "Heart Token" is Special Summoned, destroy all other Tokens you control. Destroy the original monster and the "Heart Token" during the End Phase.
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Once per turn, you may transfer any number of Sacred Counters on the field to this card (max 6). The following effects are activated according to how many Sacred Counters there are on this card:
1-2: This card cannot be destroyed by card effects.
3-4: Once per turn, you can remove 1 Sacred Counter on this card to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.
5-6: Once per turn, you can remove 2 Sacred Counters on this card to Special Summon 1 "Daedalus Warrior" Monster from your Graveyard.
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Daedalus Warrior Angel Edge" from your Hand.
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: By reducing this card's ATK by 700 points until your next Standby Phase, you can Remove one Monster on the field from Play. The Removed from Play monster returns to the field during the End Phase of this turn.
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: When this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster, Special Summon 2 "Angel Visage Tokens" [i](Level 1/Warrior/LIGHT/0 ATK/0 DEF)[/i] to the field.
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: You can Normal Summon twice per turn.
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: You can discard 1 "Daedalus Warrior" Monster from your Deck to the Graveyard to have this card attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase.
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1 "Daedalus Warrior" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner Monsters
The following effects activate according to how many "Daedalus Warrior" Monsters there are in your Graveyard:
0-2: This card loses 500 ATK.
3-5: Once per turn, this card cannot be destroyed by battle.
6+: Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Daedalus Warrior" Monster from your Hand.
(this card was a pain in the butt to make, so I just made my own font)
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: If this card destroys an opponent's monster in battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Daedalus Warrior" Monster from your Hand. It cannot declare an attack this turn.
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"Daedalus Warrior Sunlight Angel" + 2 or more Non-Tuner Monsters
The Synchro Summon of this card cannot be negated. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spells and Trap cards. Whenever this card is the target of a Monster Effect, negate that effect and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. Once per turn, you may Special Summon one of the Synchro Material Monsters used to Synchro Summon this Monster.
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1 "Daedalus Warrior" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner Monsters
When this card destroys an opponent's monster in battle, draw the top card of your Deck. If the card drawn is a Level 4 or lower "Daedalus Warrior" Monster, you can reveal it to your opponent to Special Summon it. That monster cannot declare an attack this turn. If the card is anything other than a Level 4 or lower "Daedalus Warrior" Monster, return it to the Deck and shuffle.
[IMG]http://i1119.photobucket.com/albums/k640/akasudds/DaedalusWarriorGrandMarquis.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1119.photobucket.com/albums/k640/akasudds/DaedalusWarriorHeavenCeleste.jpg[/IMG]
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: This card cannot be Tributed, nor be a Synchro or Fusion Material Monster. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Daedalus Warrior" Monster from your Hand. That monster's effect is negated.
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: If this card destroys an opponent's monster in battle, increase this card's ATK by 300 points and this card can attack again. This card cannot attack your opponent directly if it uses this effect.
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1 Level 1 Tuner + 1 Level 1 Non-Tuner Monster
Each time a Synchro Monster is Synchro Summoned, draw 1 card and Special Summon 1 "Fairy Token" [i](Level 1/Fairy-Type/LIGHT/0 ATK/0 DEF)[/i] to your side of the field. "Fairy Tokens" cannot be Synchro Material on the turn they are Special Summoned.
[IMG]http://i1119.photobucket.com/albums/k640/akasudds/DaedalusWarriorSaberCat.jpg[/IMG]
This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: This card is treated as a Tuner Monster. You can discard 1 card from your Hand to increase this card's Level by 1 until the End Phase of this turn.
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This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: If this card battles a Face-Down Defense Position Monster, immediately destroy it without flipping it up or applying Damage Calculation. After using this effect, this card can attack again. This effect cannot be used more than once per turn.
[IMG]http://i1119.photobucket.com/albums/k640/akasudds/DaedalusWarriorSunlightAngel.jpg[/IMG]
This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: This card is treated as a Tuner Monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster, gain 400 Life Points.
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[IMG]http://i1119.photobucket.com/albums/k640/akasudds/DaedalusWarriorWingedAngel.jpg[/IMG]
This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: When this card is used as Synchro Material for the Synchro Summon of a Synchro Monster, gain Life Points equal to that Synchro Monster's Level x100.
[IMG]http://i1119.photobucket.com/albums/k640/akasudds/DaedalusWarriorWorgen.jpg[/IMG]
This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: As long as this card remains Face-Up on the field, you can draw 1 Level 4 or lower "Daedalus Warrior" Monster from your Deck instead of conducting your regular draw during your Draw Phase. Then, shuffle your Deck.
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[quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1308275617' post='5289027']
sadly I don't know how to do that.... :(
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... nah its alright... ... i just didn't have enough time to check it out since i was running short of free time but now i'm good... ... i like being the 1st or 2nd to give a good review/feedback on a forum post...
alright... i'm giving you an automatic [b]+4[/b] for having a [i]background story[/i] [u]AND[/u] [i]theme[/i] for your set of cards... cuz you know what!?... that shows you care about your cards... xP

[u]OCG[/u] = [b]Good[/b]
... i noticed a few minor errors here and there like how you capitalized "[u]M[/u]onster" and "[u]R[/u]emove from [u]P[/u]lay" and stuff... but eh... effects are understandable anyways so not a big deal...
[u]Images[/u] = [b]Great![/b]
... oooo i like i like... especially [b]Daedalus Warrior Angel Ranger[/b] and [b]The Hero Returns[/b] hahaha... but okay okay really... [b]Blood, Soul, and Heart[/b] had a pretty wack image but if YOU like it... i like it... xP
[u]Comments[/u]:
[b][u](1)[/u][/b] [b]Daedalus Destruction Prevention's[/b] effect is quite common for just about every archetype coming out nowadays... like the [u]Gladiator Beasts[/u] Chariot card or the [u]Six Samurai's[/u] Magatama card (mybad i dont know the card's name exactly)... but unlike theirs... which only have one effect [[i]negate and destroy[/i]]... YOURS does two effects... it negates and destroys AND adds a card from deck to your hand... ... very handy card... and i would understand why you gave it so... ... but i say that if you wanna keep both effects on that card... it should cost you something to activate it... like maybe somewhere from 700~1000 Life Points or something like discarding 1 card from your hand... ... i guess what i'm trying to say is [b]Daedalus Destruction Prevention[/b] is kinda OP...
[b][u](2)[/u][/b] ... i'd prefer [b]Daedalus Paradise Forest[/b] being a [u]Field Spell Card[/u]... wouldn't you agree?... xP
... then again you already have 2 other [u]Field Spell Cards[/u] so i dont know how you're gonna do it... ... maybe a [u]Continuous Spell Card[/u] or something...
[b][u](3)[/u][/b] ... [b]Rain of the Angels[/b] is broken... ... it has the ability to recover TOO much Life Points... and i noticed this is one of your few cards that DOESN'T require a [b]Daedalus[/b] monster on the field to work... ... if this card was real... people might actually use and abuse this card's effect... ... maybe you can revamp this card a little?... ... i dont know... it only works for [u]LIGHT types[/u] or i dont know... [b]Daedalus[/b]?... i dont think [b]Daedalus[/b] would be too bad... most of your monster's Lv average around 2-3 only... its not much Life Points and your monsters are [u]Gemini's[/u]... so they can't swarm THAT fast for this card to be abused too well... ... i guess we'll just have to test it out... xP
[b][u](4)[/u][/b] ... most of your cards are "meh"... ... as in not bad... ... i dont know... this seems like it can work... i know [u]Gemini's[/u] dont spawn fast... ... but not letting your cards attack the turn they're special summoned?... and even more... negate their effects entirely?... ... ... i get that part of your theme is for [b]quick Synchro[/b]... but i guess(!?)... xP
[b][u](5)[/u][/b] ... my favorite card is [b]Daedalus Warrior Mystic Wolf[/b] [b]5/5[/b]... =j
[b][u](6)[/u][/b] ... last but not least... [b]Daedalus Warrior Empyrean Valkyrie[/b] is [b][u]broken[/u][/b]... ... it can only be destroyed in battle but it has [u]4500[/u]ATK... a [u]Very[/u] indestructible card... ... and i dont know how you can change it to your liking without making it NOT broken...
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[b]+3[/b] out of +4 for [b]OCG & Pictures[/b]
[b]+4[/b] out of +4 for [b]"having a theme"[/b] (woot!)
[b]+1[/b] out of +2 for [b]"attempt to reaching perfection"[/b]
[b]-1[/b] out of -2 for [b]"having card(s) being broken"[/b]
[u]Overall Rating[/u] = [b]7/10[/b]
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... i like it... [b]=j[/b]

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[quote name='lvl1hero' timestamp='1308299771' post='5289544']

[b][u](6)[/u][/b] ... last but not least... [b]Daedalus Warrior Empyrean Valkyrie[/b] is [b][u]broken[/u][/b]... ... it can only be destroyed in battle but it has [u]4500[/u]ATK... a [u]Very[/u] indestructible card... ... and i dont know how you can change it to your liking without making it NOT broken...
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I kinda noticed that when I was making this card. Even Shooting Quasar Dragon has 4000 ATK/4000 DEF, and it's effect(s) don't really stand up to this card at all (maybe except the negation). I was trying to find something between the lines of SQD and Five-Headed Dragon when I made this card, so I guess in that department, it fits. It does seem like not being able to destroyed by anything except battle seems OP, but there are so many cards out there nowadays that can destroy monsters so easily with little or no cost. I'll look into that.

[quote](2) ... i'd prefer Daedalus Paradise Forest being a Field Spell Card... wouldn't you agree?... xP
... then again you already have 2 other Field Spell Cards so i dont know how you're gonna do it... ... maybe a Continuous Spell Card or something...[/quote]

Two? I only see one...

[quote](5) ... my favorite card is Daedalus Warrior Mystic Wolf 5/5... =j[/quote]

Thanks for the feedback. if I could rep you, I would. There are a lot of things that I still need to learn to figure out on here. Anyway, I'm using these cards in a fan-fic, so any and all feedback is appreciated.

[quote]... oooo i like i like... especially Daedalus Warrior Angel Ranger and The Hero Returns hahaha... but okay okay really... Blood, Soul, and Heart had a pretty wack image but if YOU like it... i like it... xP [/quote]

I can see why. :P It's not everyday you see cards like these. I couldn't really find anything interesting on Blood, Soul, and Heart. I guess that would be the one card I would take out of this set.

Anyway, thanks for feedback.

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[quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1308357869' post='5291288']
I kinda noticed that when I was making this card. Even Shooting Quasar Dragon has 4000 ATK/4000 DEF, and it's effect(s) don't really stand up to this card at all (maybe except the negation). I was trying to find something between the lines of SQD and Five-Headed Dragon when I made this card, so I guess in that department, it fits. It does seem like not being able to destroyed by anything except battle seems OP, but there are so many cards out there nowadays that can destroy monsters so easily with little or no cost. I'll look into that.[/quote]... ah... i see i see... wow... ... yeah i missed out on a good couple of long years on this game... ... never heard of [b]Shooting Quasar Dragon[/b] before... ... oh by the way... [u]thank you[/u] for using the card's full title name... ... i would've never been able to guess what a "[u]SQD[/u]" was... ... but i see... ... yeah... [b]Shooting Quasar Dragon's[/b] got nothing on your [b]Daedalus Warrior Empyrean Valkyrie[/b]... haha... if you dont mind me ranting on more on how strong he is... well... ... your [b]Daedalus Warrior Empyrean Valkyrie[/b] is easy to summon... negates EVERYTHING... and can only die by... hmmm... ... ... yeah i can't think of a card from the top of my head... ... but yeah you know where i'm going... ... ... but it doesn't mean you can't make him more balanced... ... that is... if you [u]want[/u] to make him more balanced to seem more real...

[quote]Two? I only see one...[/quote]... oh yeah mybad... ... i mistook [b]Serene Field[/b] for a [u]Field Spell Card[/u]... mybad...

[quote]Thanks for the feedback. if I could rep you, I would. There are a lot of things that I still need to learn to figure out on here. Anyway, I'm using these cards in a fan-fic, so any and all feedback is appreciated.[/quote]... aw shucks... it doesn't matter haha... i dont need or really care for reps... ... i just like to give out my opinion on cards... ... and i'm not one of those d!cks that go out there and post like 1 sentence and gives a 5/10 rating... ... sheesh... some people... ... i mean so what if you have 5 stars and have 1000 posts... ... ... kidding i'm kidding... haha... chill people i'm just saying...
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