Classic Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [b][center][font="Century Gothic"][color="#FF0000"]Ehh a single made while half-asleep on my iPad wonder how it turned out? xD Also another card I made recently that I edited. ✖ Geminate Behemoth ✖ [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/2705/131224.jpg[/img] [u]Effect[/u] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 1 FIRE and 1 WATER monster in your Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, while on the field or in the Graveyard all FIRE monsters are also treated as WATER monsters and all WATER monsters are also treated as FIRE monsters. Once per turn you can banish 1 monster on your side of the field to activate one of the following effects: - Shuffle all banished FIRE monsters back into your deck and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card shuffled back into your Deck. -Shuffle all banished WATER monsters back into your deck and gain 500 Life Points for each card shuffled back into your Deck. ✖ Volatile Behemoth ✖ [img]http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/2705/131224.jpg[/img] [u]Effect[/u] If this card targets an opposing non Dragon-Type Monster for an attack, increase this card's ATK by 2000 until the end of the Damage Step. If this card destroys an opponent's Monster by battle place 1 'Frenzy Counter' on this card. This card gains 200 ATK for every 'Frenzy Counter' on it. If this card has 6 'Frenzy Counters' on it, destroy this card.[/color][/font][/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Wow, love behemoth's effect because it allows you to have best of both worlds;damaging and healing while and by throwing your opponent it to confusion switching the attribute.I can imagine a person facing it "Why did you do that, thats stupid what will that do?" then you just screw them with a combo they didn't see coming. An as for the second card its okay but it sucks that it self-destructs after so many counters. 8.2/10 overall nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [color="#0000FF"][font="Century Gothic"][b][center]Thanks for such a positive review ^^.[/center][/b][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 First effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 1 FIRE and 1 WATER monster in your Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all FIRE monsters are also treated as WATER monsters and all WATER monsters are also treated as FIRE monsters. [b]This just throws all balance off this card by making it so you can obtain one of the effects from all Fire and Water monsters dramatically.... Think about it, so all water and fire monsters are treated the same, really. so you activate one of these effects and gain it for all cards shuffled back in b/c you'd have to add all the water and fire monsters to your deck, which can be alot....So, its either an instant burn or gain effect rolled into one.[/b] Once per turn you can banish 1 monster on your side of the field to activate one of the following effects: - Shuffle all banished FIRE monsters back into your deck and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card shuffled back into your Deck. -Shuffle all banished WATER monsters back into your deck and gain 500 Life Points for each card shuffled back into your Deck. [b]If you get my drift, I'd make it so its a little less op'd by giving one of the effects here a draw back, preferably the burn one, but that's just IMO....or at least make it 7 stars or remove 2 Fire and 2 Water monsters.....[/b] .76/1 = C = 76% Second Effect: Decent, okay image, likable, this one isn't bad.... I give an .85 = B = 85% Total: 80% = C+ = Great Job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [color="#FF0000"][font="Century Gothic"][center][b]Thanks for the review ^^. I'll think about the suggestions but I though it was fairly balanced :L, on the OP side Ofc but that's just my card making style. EDIT: Just noticed something I missed, i'm going to make it 'while on the field or in the graveyard FIRE monsters are treated as WATER monsters etc. etc.[/b][/center][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 IMO [i]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, while on the field or in the Graveyard [/i] This at first card need to + banished card zone, then the effects is more explosive It is like that 1350 ATK machine Level 3 which i forgot the name, but for the Dragon. Kinda like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [color="#0000FF"][font="Century Gothic"][center][b]Thanks for feedback^^ And it was like that. But due to the second part of the effect it would be instant 1000 LP gain and 1000 burn if you use that effect :/ And that would be pushing the invisible line to OP to much lol. But it's all opinions I suppose.[/b][/center][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 So, yeah. Sorry you follow da Balanced form RC. I'm usable oriented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 it's fine for effect 1st one is just a DNA Surgery effect for FIRE and WATER, LP burn and gain seem reasonable though 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Very nice cards m8. Well done! 9.9 (recurring) /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [font="Century Gothic"][color="#FF0000"][center][b]@ Maha Say What? o.O @ Ragnarok Thanks for feedback ^^ @ Kyng of Ice Thanks for rate, glad you like em^^[/b][/center][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [color="#0000FF"][font="Century Gothic"][center][b]Bump [sup][s][size=1]to first Post FTW[/size][/s][/sup][/b][/center][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 I mean i am usable oriented when rating/making a card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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