DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 [center][img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/7481/115072.jpg[/img] While at least 1 of your Fish-Type, Aqua-Type, or Sea Serpent-Type monsters are Banished, during the Damage Step, Banish this card (from your hand) to: Increase the ATK of 1 Level 3 or lower OR Rank 3, Fish-Type, Aqua-Type, or Sea Serpent-Type Monster you control by 1000 until the End Phase. Hope you like it.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 "While at least 1 of your Fish, Aqua, or Sea Serpent-Type monsters are Banished, during the Damage Step you can Banish this card from your hand to increase the ATK of one Level 3 or lower, OR Rank 3, Fish, Aqua, or Sea Serpent-Type Monster you control by 1000 until the End Phase." - That is shorter, and I think easier to read while still making sense. (and if I'm not wrong, still being correct) The card itself is pretty good, but because it only effects level 3 or lower or rank 3 monsters, I think the ATK boost should be larger (say 1500), or you could increase the level of the monster it can effect to 4 or 5 and keep the ATK boost at 1000. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 The Banishark Mini-Archetype from Generation Force. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 Hmm...I thinks it's ok, a simple ATK booster. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 While at least 1 of your Fish, Aqua, or Sea Serpent-Type monsters are Banished, during the Damage Step, Banish this card (from your hand) to: Increase the ATK of 1 Level 3 or lower OR Rank 3, Fish, Aqua, or Sea Serpent-Type monster you control by 1000 until the End Phase. ...-Type just put on the last if say 2 more monster type. Rank 3 cannot be compared to Level 3 or lower IMO, IMO Rank 3 = Level 5 or 6 Effect Monster. So, you can either raise the Level to 5 or lower or decrease Rank to 2 or 1 . The rest is fine . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 I like this. First off, props to adding in the "OR Rank 3" text. That made me chuckle with happiness. AND it makes sense. We should start seeing Rank Support in the OCG/TCG. Secondly, i like the activation condition. You need to have your own ball rolling before you can activate his effect. Next, the solid 1000 boost is great. It sticks it to "honest" and any other similar cards. 1000 points is usually all you need anyway. Lastly, i like the banishing. It adds to the theme you are already trying to support and it just makes sense. Overall, good card. 9/10 Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted June 14, 2011 Report Share Posted June 14, 2011 LOVE, they need the Extra Attack, as they are basically all horribly weak... but I'd give it some amount of stats... maybe like 800/600 or something Shouldn't the OCG read: "While you have 1 or more Banished Fish-, Aqua-, or Sea Serpent-Type..." [color="#FFFFFF"]^On the first sentence... I could be wrong[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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