Aonon Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 This set/deck is based around a new archetype called the "Murderous Maidens" . They are dark and corrupted counterparts to my previous full set, the Angelic Maidens. The Murderous Maiden specialize in sending monsters directly from the deck to the graveyard and utilizing the effects of such monsters. All images taken from Google. [img]http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/3362/25873i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/5586/25873.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5150/25873v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/5586/25873.jpg[/img] lemme know what you guys think? :3 repeat, all images taken from google. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 You may wanna change Lythe. That's Lucy from Elfen Lied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 [quote name='Raptor Slash' timestamp='1308105646' post='5284117'] You may wanna change Lythe. That's Lucy from Elfen Lied. [/quote] oh. lol I never watched that. perhaps I will in the final version. X3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 lol okay! You should watch it sometime. Ya know, if you're into lots of blood and nude girls. If not, then you might not like it. XD But don't get me wrong. It's really sad and very dramatic. I almost cried while watching it. On topic: In your effects, use "can" instead of "may". Also capitalize the "T" in "type". Remember to check out real cards to clarify some OCG you might not be sure on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Maidens are always murderous, that's nothing new there's nothing really WRONG about the effects, but they're not anything new, so I'll give the set 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 So much combat stats. Unexpected. Evange is pointless. Milling a monster does not make it less available unless you're getting everything from the Deck and are not using Pot of Avarice. (You'd be using Pot of Avarice). Menagerie's first effect is very strong, and it would pretty much always be fueled by cards other than the Maidens, but it doesn't work in the Damage Step, so Urlynn can't do much with it and it's balanced. The second effect has no reason to exist. Maybe if you could put the monster on [i]top[/i] of your Deck...No, it's still not worth losing your draw. Ryena probably wouldn't be doing much damage, but at least it doesn't take up your Summon. I don't see how you'd mill it, except with Lythe (which is not a good idea). Myabi's okay. She's good for Synchros, I suppose. Urlynn's pretty good. I'd be aiming for Wulf every time. Nelythe is by far the best. You can use her with Foolish Burial, Swap Frog and most Lightsworns. Being a Tuner doesn't hurt either. Lythe is not cost-balanced. You can mill low-Level cards like Spore and Glow-Up Bulb with very little injury. Change it to a standard 1000 damage to fix it, I say. Hiadira is broken. It's too cheap. Summoning it through Menagerie gives you an instant 6300 ATK. The pictures represent what they're supposed to represent. So that's all right. The concept is roughly "together." 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1308178313' post='5286057'] Maidens are always murderous, that's nothing new there's nothing really WRONG about the effects, but they're not anything new, so I'll give the set 9.2/10 [/quote] \ thank you ^^[quote name='newhat' timestamp='1308201173' post='5286915'] So much combat stats. Unexpected. Evange is pointless. Milling a monster does not make it less available unless you're getting everything from the Deck and are not using Pot of Avarice. (You'd be using Pot of Avarice). Menagerie's first effect is very strong, and it would pretty much always be fueled by cards other than the Maidens, but it doesn't work in the Damage Step, so Urlynn can't do much with it and it's balanced. The second effect has no reason to exist. Maybe if you could put the monster on [i]top[/i] of your Deck...No, it's still not worth losing your draw. Ryena probably wouldn't be doing much damage, but at least it doesn't take up your Summon. I don't see how you'd mill it, except with Lythe (which is not a good idea). Myabi's okay. She's good for Synchros, I suppose. Urlynn's pretty good. I'd be aiming for Wulf every time. Nelythe is by far the best. You can use her with Foolish Burial, Swap Frog and most Lightsworns. Being a Tuner doesn't hurt either. Lythe is not cost-balanced. You can mill low-Level cards like Spore and Glow-Up Bulb with very little injury. Change it to a standard 1000 damage to fix it, I say. Hiadira is broken. It's too cheap. Summoning it through Menagerie gives you an instant 6300 ATK. The pictures represent what they're supposed to represent. So that's all right. The concept is roughly "together." 7/10 [/quote] The purpose of Evange was to give your other Murderous Maidens an endless supply of ammo to use their effects. I'll keep the advice on Lythe in mind, increasing her ATK to 1000. Menagerie, good advice on the tweaking. And lol Hiadira is my Sig. card. She was made WAAAAY before I got the idea to make a set. She won't be in the actual set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 I like them. Pics fit. Effects are good and not OP'd. Everything about them seems good. Continue with them they're looking good. 10/10 The pics reminded me of "Kill Bill." XD Love those movies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted June 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 [quote name='darkstar_316' timestamp='1308268243' post='5288786'] I like them. Pics fit. Effects are good and not OP'd. Everything about them seems good. Continue with them they're looking good. 10/10 The pics reminded me of "Kill Bill." XD Love those movies. [/quote] hahaha, thankee for the high rating X3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zen-Psi Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 Maidens gone crazy, meh 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 [quote name='Aonon' timestamp='1308263901' post='5288656']I'll keep the advice on Lythe in mind, increasing her ATK to 1000. [/quote]I meant to increase the damage you take from her effect to 1000 no matter what you mill. Right now, milling Glow-Up Bulb/Spore with her effect does 100 damage. [quote name='Aonon' timestamp='1308263901' post='5288656']The purpose of Evange was to give your other Murderous Maidens an endless supply of ammo to use their effects. [/quote] If you draw her, she is dead in the hand. If you could return her from your hand to your Deck for something, this wouldn't be a problem. On the newer cards: Azmede isn't worth the Tribute. Eloche's effect doesn't seem usable. Most milling effects happen during your turn, not your opponent's. The Sweetest Rose isn't viable. I see now why you made their stats the way you did. Too much pain! Wycce is okay, but all it really does is offset using up your Normal Summon with Lythe. I guess it could give some hand advantage. Grim Aura could plausibly be used to protect Nelyth, but Safe Zone is better. Nothing else really needs or benefits from it. Diagnosis: Needs more millers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aonon Posted June 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1308284221' post='5289267'] I meant to increase the damage you take from her effect to 1000 no matter what you mill. Right now, milling Glow-Up Bulb/Spore with her effect does 100 damage. If you draw her, she is dead in the hand. If you could return her from your hand to your Deck for something, this wouldn't be a problem. On the newer cards: Azmede isn't worth the Tribute. Eloche's effect doesn't seem usable. Most milling effects happen during your turn, not your opponent's. The Sweetest Rose isn't viable. I see now why you made their stats the way you did. Too much pain! Wycce is okay, but all it really does is offset using up your Normal Summon with Lythe. I guess it could give some hand advantage. Grim Aura could plausibly be used to protect Nelyth, but Safe Zone is better. Nothing else really needs or benefits from it. Diagnosis: Needs more millers. [/quote] thank you for the advice, I'll keep it in mind when I make the revisions. these are just the basic ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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