PGR Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Ok, the day I joined YCM I saw this one guy's "Gamble" Arch-type thing and was instantly inspired by them. These aren't gamble arch-types, but they're cards put together on a gambling theme. [img]http://i1195.photobucket.com/albums/aa394/KurodaKaito/order-10.png[/img] [IMG]http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g358/Tim_Finnegan/Example.gif[/IMG] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4238/430090m.jpg[/img] This card's effect cannot be activated except by sending 1 Level 6 or higher monster from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Each turn, select 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field. At the end of each turn, shuffle the selected card back into your Deck. Pay 1000 Life Points each turn or this card is destroyed. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/6076/430090.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Demon's Roulette". This card cannot attack. When this card is Special Summoned to your side of the field, tribute 1 "Demon's Roulette" to banish 2 monsters from your opponent's side of the field. During your next stand-by phase after "Evil Spirit from Within the Roulette" is summoned, Banish this card. [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/6076/430090.jpg[/img] 1 "Evil Spirit from Within the Roulette" + 2 Tuners This card cannot Attack. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Each turn, discard 1 card to select one monster on your opponent's side of the field and roll 1 six-sided die. Multiply the result by 100 and reduce the selected monster's attack by that amount. If the selected monster's Attack becomes 0, that monster is destroyed. After 2 turns, tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Evil Spirit from Within the Roulette Lvl 12" from your hand or deck. [img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/6076/430090.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Evil Spirit from Within the Roulette Lvl 10. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. This card cannot attack. Each turn, discard two cards to select one monster on your opponent's side of the field and roll 2 Six-Sided Dice. Multiply the result by 100 and reduce the selected monster's attack by this amount. If the selected monster's attack hits 0, that monster is destroyed. For every monster this card destroys, your opponent loses 1000 Life Points. Last pic is a little blurry, but the effect's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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lvl1hero Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 ... wow... nice idea... and nice looking cards... i'm not one to judge on the images... its just a picture... but i get where you're going with this... ... but question though... [b](1)[/b] [i]"Each turn, discard---"[/i] : ... you got a few cards that use this in their effects... ... does that mean each turn you HAVE to discard???... if it isn't forced... maybe you can change it to [i]"Once per turn, you can discard---"[/i] instead if you want... this way you dont have to be forced to discard against your will... [b](2)[/b] ... i noticed that your cards can ONLY be special summoned with the effects of the card before it... making them harder to enter the field... ... like how [b]Evil Spirit From Within the Roulette Lv12[/b] needs to WAIT for [b]Evil Spirit From Within the Roulette Lv10[/b] to finish staying on the field for 2 turns before he gets to come out and etc... ... so those cards aren't too bad (meaning not OP or broken)... [u]Overall Rating[/u]: [b]4.5/5[/b] ... i like em... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 On your Synchro card, you have the non-tuner monster first and then the tuners needed. It should be reversed (unless the world of Yu-Gi-Oh is coming to an end!) I also noticed that you wrote this effect for one of your cards: [quote] Each turn, discard two cards to select one monster on your opponent's side of the field and roll 2 Six-Sided Dice. Multiply the result by 100 and reduce the selected monster's attack by this amount. If the selected monster's attack [b]hits[/b] 0, that monster is destroyed. [/quote] It would make more sense and sound more professional if the effect read something like this: [quote] Each turn, discard two cards to select one monster on your opponent's side of the field and roll 2 Six-Sided Die. Multiply the result by 100 and reduce the selected monster's attack by this amount. If the selected monster's [b]ATK becomes 0 due to this effect[/b], that monster is destroyed.[/quote] Breakdown: 7/10 - Concept and originality 8/10 - OCG 8/10 - Artwork (I didn't think the last picture was THAT blurry) Total: 7.66/10 (Great) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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