These are four cards in a series I intend to make.

[Veniet]

I'd like some help along the way. Any advice would be welcome. These are the four main body cards

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[b][/b]Effect- While you control another "Four Light Generals" monster with a different name, as long as this card remains face up on the field, all face up monsters on your side of the field gain 600 ATK points and 300 DEF points until the end of each of your turns. If this card would be destroyed, you can destry another "Four Light Generals" monster you control instead.


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[b][/b]Effect- As long as you control another "The Four Light Generals" with a different name, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card is to be destroyed, you can destroy another "Four Light Generals" monster you control instead.

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[b][/b]Effect- When you control another "Four Light Generals" monster with a different name, and when there exists at least one other "Four Light Generals" monster on your side of the field, you can Special Summon this card by removing from play 2 Light monsters from your graveyard. When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, you can select one card at random from your opponent's hand and send it to the graveyard. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another "Four Light Generals" monster you control instead


[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/3091/432697.jpg[/img].

[b][/b]Effect As long as you control another "Four Light Generals" monster with a different name on your side of the field, you can switch the battle position of 1 of your opponent's monsters regardless of face-down defence status for every "Four Light Generals" monster on your side of the field with a different name. If this card deals battle damage to your opponent's Life Points, you gain 500 Life Points for every "Four Light Generals" monster on your side of the field. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another "Four Light Generals" monster you control instead.

[ragnarok1945]

quite the impressive pics

For all of them, "If this card would be destroyed, you can destry another "Four Light Generals" monster you control instead." <--keep that effect to once per turn

Dessymentia's LP gain effect is boring, it's better if your burn your opponent, though if you do that you'd have to tune down the LP per Four Light Generals of a burn

8.3/10

[Veniet]

Thanks for the comment, though you think I'm aiming a little high concerning defence?