Sohaib Ahmed Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/8346/147693.jpg[/img] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/8346/147693.jpg[/img] [img]http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/8346/147693.jpg[/img] What do you think of these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Double Attack seems okay, OP though. Remember, types of monsters need to be capitalized (Warrior-Type, Spellcaster-Type; like that) In Heavenly Charm, it has the same problem, it didn't capitalize the types; also if it heals you by that much every turn you need to specify when. Is it, during the Standby Phase, End Phase.... opponents Standby Phase? (Also, Life Points needs to be capitalized and split into 2 words as shown, and "Increases" should probably be "Increase") Card Select is a Counter Spell... yeah. Make it a Normal Spell. "If you control no monsters, by sending 1 Spell card from your hand to the Graveyard; Special Summon 2 monsters from your Graveyard." - fix. ("...by sending 1 Spell card from your hand to the Graveyard..." could read "...by discarding 1 Spell card..."; but its up to you how you write it.) (Spell and Trap (when mentioning those types of cards) needs capitalized) Also, Card Select is a bit OP as well, make it so that the selectd monsters cannot attack this turn, are destroyed at the end phase, or cannot be used as a synchro summon or something. Any slight drawback will work to make this card even out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Erm...[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Double_Attack"]Double Attack[/url] already exists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Yes, but the effect is quite different. This Double Attack has no real drawback and allows all of your monsters to attack twice. Just Change the name of your card and add a drawback (and fix those minor things I mentioned in my previous post) and you should be good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neos the Ancient Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Nice, some OCG errors. Other than that, you might wanna change the name of the first card, since Double Attack already exists. Maybe Double Strike? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Double Attack needs to have an attack limit, or it'll be broken Heavenly Charm's gain effect is meh. Solemn Wishes can do better 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Double attack already exists...but the picture you used for it reminds me of something. Where did you get it? The second one is okay...Like Rag said Solemn Wishes is better. The third shouldn't be a counter spell. Those don't exist. pics are pretty good. OCG needs work, but I'm not the one to trust. The third also seems a bit OP'd to me. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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