hyperwater Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 here is card that was rejected in the best yugioh card maker's comp. Tell me what you think! [attachment=22229] When this card is flipped face-up activate one of the following effects - Discard a card to end your opponents turn - Return 2 cards from the field to their owners hand then both players discard a card- Pay 1000 Life Points to destroy a card on the field. Then choose a card in your opponents hand and send it to the graveyard. Then randomly pick 1 card in your opponent's deck and send it to your opponent's Graveyard. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
achoi2 Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 I think the effects are a bit strong, and the points a bit low this card could be good for a level 4, but thats my point of view, good creation on the card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 well i had to make it level 6 to make the effect equal to the power of the monster. This way it isn't overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Grammar errorsbut it is nice ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Why do all my cards have some sort of grammer error in then..... (cries) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteamboatStitch Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 Very nice. When it says "Discard a card to end your opponent's turn", can you discard from anywhere? (field, deck, hand, etc.) Or was this simply an error? (Or me being ignorant.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 It was to make the text shorter. You discard a card from your hand....it is grammatically incorrect if you say "discard a card from the field" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 i would have it say :"FLIP: Activate one of the following Effects:o blah blaho blah bleh blaho etc etc" but the 3rd effect is overpowerd... it makes deliquent duo seem normal.... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 great effort,keep trying 7/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAJ Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 cool card good effect = 9.99999999999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 i would have it say :"FLIP: Activate one of the following Effects:o blah blaho blah bleh blaho etc etc" but the 3rd effect is overpowerd... it makes deliquent duo seem normal.... 6/10 True, but you've got to account that its a monster which means you have to summon it and its 6 stars. If you special summon it then it has to be face up which mean its useless. Delinquint Duo is trap card and is easy to use, this card is a different story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 i would have it say :"FLIP: Activate one of the following Effects:o blah blaho blah bleh blaho etc etc" but the 3rd effect is overpowerd... it makes deliquent duo seem normal.... 6/10 True' date=' but you've got to account that its a monster which means you have to summon it and its 6 stars. If you special summon it then it has to be face up which mean its useless. Delinquint Duo is trap card and is easy to use, this card is a different story.[/quote'] Hmmm, I thought Delinquent Duo was a Spell. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 i would have it say :"FLIP: Activate one of the following Effects:o blah blaho blah bleh blaho etc etc" but the 3rd effect is overpowerd... it makes deliquent duo seem normal.... 6/10 True' date=' but you've got to account that its a monster which means you have to summon it and its 6 stars. If you special summon it then it has to be face up which mean its useless. Delinquint Duo is trap card and is easy to use, this card is a different story.[/quote'] Hmmm, I thought Delinquent Duo was a Spell. I like it. lol I'm not sure if its a spell or trap card. I've only ever seen it in the video games Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 11, 2008 Report Share Posted February 11, 2008 Its not at all bad, everybody above me pointed out your slight errors, nice effort though. 8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2008 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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