l/e/w/i/s Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 This is my first card. I made some changes to it. some advice would be appreciated [img]http://i.imgur.com/R3iXu.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ancient gem master Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 lore: Discard 1 Monster from your hand, then Destroy 1 Monster on your oppenents side of the field overall :very good design. picture goes with card. well done considering it is your first card. 8/10 /only the lore let you down but nevermind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
l/e/w/i/s Posted June 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 [quote name='ancient gem master' timestamp='1308290830' post='5289371'] lore: Discard 1 Monster from your hand, then Destroy 1 Monster on your oppenents side of the field overall :very good design. picture goes with card. well done considering it is your first card. 8/10 /only the lore let you down but nevermind. [/quote] Thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 Lv. 5 with 1900 ATK is meh, but the effect is not terrible. If it was a Synchro, I'd laugh all the way home. Pic is from Grabi-Slash Dragon.has nothing to do with rating, but don't rip pics. CorrectOCG: Discard 1 Monster card. Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls. Corrct New OCG: Discard 1 Monster card: Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls. It is not bad, but not great. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 too plain of an effect nothing really wrong about it, just not too creative 1900 is also weak for lv5, make it 2200 or something 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ancient gem master Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 dont you just hate hatersw than always talk smack about your cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 [quote name='ancient gem master' timestamp='1308292666' post='5289409'] dont you just hate hatersw than always talk smack about your cards? [/quote] Ok, I gotta see what cards this guy has posted! As for the card. I know someone has said this but the picture is from a real Yu-Gi-Oh! card. The stats are bad but the effect, eh. I doubt anyone would use this. Also extremely unoriginal. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 2000-2100 ATK is still balanced for me , so raise it. Plain effect but very2 useful, 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 [quote name='ancient gem master' timestamp='1308292666' post='5289409'] dont you just hate hatersw than always talk smack about your cards? [/quote] Dincha hate when n00bs see a rating as flaming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 It's been said, but that pic is from another, real YGO card... Other then that, it's actually pretty balanced, but then you look at its stats, and its only got 1900 ATK and it requires a tribute. I'd suggest making the effect once per turn on your turn, but thats just me. Overall quite good for youre first! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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