[CR.] Swamp Croc

[.Rai]

Template is mine (nearly).

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2 Level 4 Reptile-Type monsters
Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; banish 1 card on the field from play. If this card is removed from the field while you control a Reptile-Type monster: you can Tribute 1 Reptile-Type monster you control to return 2 cards on the field to their owner’s hands. While this card has no Xyz Materials, it cannot attack directly.

A small OCG fix was made.[/center]

[SirtyStan]

Alright. Looks great, but there are some OCG errors. I'll correct them for you.

[spoiler=OCG Fixes]
2 Level 4 Reptile-Type monsters
[b]If[/b] this card has no Xyz Material [b]Monsters attached to it[/b], it cannot attack directly. Once per turn[b],[/b] you can detach 1 Xyz Material [b]Monster[/b] from this card [b]to[/b] banish 1 card [b]on the field[/b] from play. If this card is removed from the field while you control a Reptile-Type [b]M[/b]onster[b],[/b] you can Tribute 1 Reptile-Type [b]M[/b]onster you control to return 2 cards on the field to their owner’s hands.
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Everything bolded are the fixes. Also I moved the last effect to the front, because it is a generic effect.

[Organized Chaos]

[quote name='Sirty_stan' timestamp='1308429849' post='5293308']
Alright. Looks great, but there are some OCG errors. I'll correct them for you.

[spoiler=OCG Fixes]
2 Level 4 Reptile-Type monsters
[b]If[/b] this card has no Xyz Material [b]Monsters attached to it[/b], it cannot attack directly. Once per turn[b],[/b] you can detach 1 Xyz Material [b]Monster[/b] from this card [b]to[/b] banish 1 card [b]on the field[/b] from play. If this card is removed from the field while you control a Reptile-Type [b]M[/b]onster[b],[/b] you can Tribute 1 Reptile-Type [b]M[/b]onster you control to return 2 cards on the field to their owner’s hands.
[/spoiler]

Everything bolded are the fixes. Also I moved the last effect to the front, because it is a generic effect.
[/quote]
Actually, it was right the first time. And an Xyz not being able to attack directly when it has no Materials isn't generic. Only this card and revise Dragon has it. A really good card, love the effect of banishing a card every turn. Just thinking of an archtype/deck that spams Level 4 Reptiles....

[.Rai]

Thanks <3

Basically, it's to abuse Reptillianes; Aliens etc.

Offerings to the Snake Deity combos well. Basically the reason I made it.

[EndlessOcean]

<3 dat art

Anyway, brilliant card, no OCG errors i can see at the moment:

9.998/10

[MibeR]

This one is Great Reptile user Xyz. Like the returning effect condition

[ascriptmaster]

Its first effect seems kinda crazy (once per turn equivalent to Caius minus burn), but balanced. Also, dat art

lol "banish 1 card [b]from play[/b]"

A few OCG errors, very minor.
[quote]Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card [b]to target 1 card on the field; banish that target[/b]. If this card [b]leaves the field[/b] while you control a Reptile-Type monster: You can Tribute 1 Reptile-Type monster you control [b]to target 2 cards on the field; return them to their owner's hands[/b]. While this card has no Xyz Materials, it cannot attack directly.[/quote]

[.Rai]

[quote name='jushirouki' timestamp='1308472181' post='5294719']
Its first effect seems kinda crazy (once per turn equivalent to Caius minus burn), but balanced. Also, dat art

lol "banish 1 card [b]from play[/b]"

A few OCG errors, very minor.
[/quote]

Yeah, that was the correct OCG. Forgot about adding 'leaving the field'. Will change everything later.

[newhat]

If this were splashable, it would be great beyond measure. Since it's only usable in Worms, Aliens, and one other archetype whose name escapes--Reptilianne! That's it. It can't be run well outside of those, so it's fine.

The "can't attack directly" effect is out of left field. I suggest you change it to Chaos Sorcerer's limitation.