Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/4237/402356r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2135/402356l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/5677/402356h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img813.imageshack.us/img813/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4237/402356r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/1540/402356j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/2561/402356d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/407/402356u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/9403/402356k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img805.imageshack.us/img805/6452/402356m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9114/402356e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/2135/402356l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/4872/402356gp.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/4148/402356y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/9938/402356js.jpg[/img] [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/4326/402356n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/2388/402356s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/5529/402356o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5576/402356p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4275/402356rmy.jpg[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/9403/402356k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3450/402356c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img808.imageshack.us/img808/1544/402356q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/407/402356u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/7154/402356.jpg[/img] [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/2561/402356d.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Hey buddy, good idea. Ok, some OCG errors, but you need to post the lores so I can fix them. I can see they are all "Brawlers", but maybe have them named: Brawler - Mario Some overpowered cards, but like I said, need lores. Pic wise, I would have only taken footage from the game or these kind of images: [spoiler='Images'] [img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/c/c6/MarioBrawl.jpg[/img][img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/5/54/Link.jpg[/img][img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/8/89/Pikachu.jpg[/img][img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/3/3c/Kirby.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] Overall 7/10, not bad for a first go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Ok pal, but I will need some time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 [quote name='Kyng of Ice' timestamp='1308435198' post='5293543'] Pic wise, I would have only taken footage from the game or these kind of images: [spoiler='Images'] [img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/c/c6/MarioBrawl.jpg[/img][img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/5/54/Link.jpg[/img][img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/8/89/Pikachu.jpg[/img][img]http://images.wikia.com/ssb/images/3/3c/Kirby.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] I thought that, but I decided like each image like, with unique background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the death god of pain Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 you suck 0/0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Girl Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 [quote name='the death god of pain' timestamp='1308532660' post='5296345'] you suck 0/0 [/quote] Hey, maybe instead of being an ass you can actually give some constructive criticism! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowserpent Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 [quote name='the death god of pain' timestamp='1308532660' post='5296345'] you suck 0/0 [/quote] :U well you suck to Overall the cards aren't to bad, some need better pictures though ._. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 [quote name='the death god of pain' timestamp='1308532660' post='5296345'] you suck 0/0 [/quote] Maybe I suck! , but what did you espected, it`s my first topic! [quote name='NerdyGirl ' timestamp='1308533831' post='5296376'] Hey, maybe instead of being an ass you can actually give some constructive criticism! [/quote] Thank you! [quote name='shadowserpent' timestamp='1308537404' post='5296439'] :U well you suck to Overall the cards aren't to bad, some need better pictures though ._. 7/10 [/quote] Thank you too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 20, 2011 Report Share Posted June 20, 2011 [quote name='the death god of pain' timestamp='1308532660' post='5296345'] you suck 0/0 [/quote] Hey, how about you shut your trap you little waste of space. He tried and put effort into good cards and you just comment like that, you troll faced ugly piece of trash. Get a life and then I dare you come back, useless piece of garbage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonic X Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 [quote name='the death god of pain' timestamp='1308532660' post='5296345'] you suck 0/0 [/quote] the only people who suck don't even try to post a card design an d instead put others down so they can feel better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seeker Lyuri Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 I propose everyone stops feeding the "you suck 0/0" troll just to feel better. By acknowledging its existence you're doing what it wants you to do. Anyway, since this thread got bumped hopefully the OP is still here. The OCG is okay but not perfect. But, it's still good for a first set. Still work on it, though. Since he's level 4, Snake's ATK should likely be decreased to 1900 or below, unless you give him a negative effect (low DEF doesn't count as a negative effect). Sheik could probably be reduced to level 8. I can see Marth and Ike working well if they're put in a Warrior deck based on Special Summoning. It's good to make cards that fit their type's archetype, so even if this was unintentional, good job. ...And it seems you hate ROB a lot, but in card making you have to look past that and at least make him SOMEWHAT decent. Anyway, make some Spell and Trap cards too, to support this new Brawlers archetype. Final words: You're doing good from what I can see, and you definitely have potential, so keep on going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sooba10000 Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 [quote name='the death god of pain' timestamp='1308532660' post='5296345'] you suck 0/0 [/quote] Ha! what a failtroll! anyways, i liked your cards. a few notes - Olimar is o-ped because every turn you can special summon a 2000 atk monster with an immunity of your choice tailored to your opponent's deck - Vanilla monsters are boring and U-ped. you could easily come up with fitting effects for shiek, snake, etc. mabey "You may special summon this monster from your hand in face-up attack position by returning one 'Zelda the Brawler' to your hand from your side of the field" for sheik. - Special "final smash" spells would be cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masterbubu69 Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 SSB cards are overdone, but I like a lot of these... but I'm kinda sad-faced that Cpt. Falcon is so weak ...and DIDDY KONG IS STRONGER!?!? ...oh well lol I would use Bowser, Tabuu, Falco, Snake, and Wolf in a deck. Okay cards 7.5/10 *thumbs up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlsymonds Posted June 28, 2011 Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 These cards were used to promote the original Super Smash Bros.It looks good and very true to the video game series. I just read the rules and looked over many of the cards and most of it looks good except for one concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted June 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 Ok, I thought about making the final smashes, I will, and I also forgot making samus, mr game and watch, and pit, but later I will complete the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MLDKF Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 The images seem really cool and the abillities and strengths of most of them seem accurate and fair. However, there are a few numbers (Jigglypuff's IMO) that seem really off. That being said, this isn't too bad, but maybe make some tweaks and you'll have it down. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted July 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Jigglypuff in SSBB is a little psycotically strong, that explains the power Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChubbyCheeks Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 Pretty good cards. Minor OCG errors, some are a lil overpowered. I also noticed that you have a lot of cards that have the lore of "No Spell Cards can be activated while this card is face-up on the field." I think it should be, "While this card is Face-Up on the field, all Spell Cards effect(s) are negated." Of course, I'm not really sure, but I think it's right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johan Liebert Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 good, but some OCG errors like every one is saying. [By the way, what does OCG stand for? ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltanis the Adjudicator Posted July 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 Yes, the effects are like divided by games, for example, starfox character`s effects are similar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue-Eyes White Kuriboh Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 Snake is pretty overpowered Imo, being lv4 with 2300 ATK and no drawback. maybe give him an effect similar to Goblin attack force? Also, all of your lv 4's seem to have really low ATK and DEF. But i guess that's not my area to criticize. 7/10, interesting concepts, i'd like to see more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Twizzler Posted July 29, 2011 Report Share Posted July 29, 2011 The pics just aren't the Yu-Gi-Oh style. Maybe find some hand-drawn pics or anime pics of them and it would look great.Too overpowered as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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