KurashiDragon Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Hello all. This is KurashiDragon coming back after a year of not being here. (Due to lack of creativity.) To honor my return I've decided to redo my very first card and present it to you guys again. Now I haven't done this in a while so my OCG isn't as good as it could be but bear with me while I present it to you. [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/7792/50433.jpg[/img] CardLore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 FIRE monsters from your field to the Graveyard. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can banish 1 FIRE monster in your hand and Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard. Any monster Special Summoned by this effect cannot attack or activate their abilities on the turn they are Summoned. If this monster is removed from the field by a card effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted June 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Bump Wow zero views. Makes me sad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 [size="1.5"][color="#FF8C00"][font="Century Gothic"][center]Welcome back kurashi I remember you from somewhere... The card is good. OCG looks fine except hand is not capitalized and at a point in the lore you said 'send banish' it should be 1 or the other =P. Pic is good For being gone for a year your card making skills have not rusted much xD. 8.8/10[/center][/font][/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 3 FIRE monsters from your field to the Graveyard. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can banish 1 card in your Hand and Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard. Any monster Special Summoned by this effect cannot attack or activate their abilities on the turn they are Summoned. If this monster is removed from the field by a card effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. I fixed what I thought needed correction, also you should make a specific type of card to banish and I think it would balance it alittle better. 7.5/10 also nice pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [quote name='Kzoki' timestamp='1308787250' post='5304031'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 3 FIRE monsters from your field to the Graveyard. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can banish 1 card in your Hand and Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard. Any monster Special Summoned by this effect cannot attack or activate their abilities on the turn they are Summoned. If this monster is removed from the field by a card effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. I fixed what I thought needed correction, also you should make a specific type of card to banish and I think it would balance it alittle better. 7.5/10 also nice pic. [/quote] I suppose I can make it a FIRE monster to banish instead. I had that effect as a spell card before but I felt that was to underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 FIRE monsters from your field to the Graveyard. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can banish 1 FIRE monster in your hand and Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard. Any monster Special Summoned by this effect cannot attack or activate their [s]abilities[/s] effects on the turn they are Summoned. If this monster is removed from the field by a card effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. Card's Effect-proof? No. Limit it only once/twice per duel Sent 3 FIRE monsters is too common IMO, try to make it different like 2 from field, 1 from hand? I remember you somehow. .... .... Oh yeah, that pancakes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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