Ren✧ Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [center][img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/6398/traptriggerer.png[/img][/center][center][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="2"][center]1 Warrior-Type Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters[/center][center]As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field: Your opponent cannot activate any Trap Cards during your turn, except when this card is attacking. This card must attack if able. Once per turn: You can decrease your Life Points by 1000 to negate the effect of 1 Trap Card that designates this card as a target. If 2 or more cards on your side of the field are designated by the effect of 1 Trap Card: You can banish this card from your field or Graveyard to negate the effect of the Trap Card and destroy it.[/center][/size][/font][/center][center][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"] [/font][/center][center][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"] [/font][/center][center][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="2"]OCG Credit: Mr. Striker[/size][/font][/center][center][font="tahoma, verdana, arial, sans-serif"][size="2"]Template Creadit: J u d a s[/size][/font][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Maniac Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Great card! I know that the KEEP verb in OCG don't exist so I will suggest the next fragment: " Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points to negate the effect of 1 Trap Card that designates this card as a target. If 2 or more cards on your side of the field are designated by the effect of 1 Trap Card, you can banish this card from your field or Graveyard to negate the effect of the Trap Card and destroy it." The idea is original, a Synchro Trap destroyer, I never thought in one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [quote name='Luis Edmundo' timestamp='1308799771' post='5304429'] Great card! I know that the KEEP verb in OCG don't exist so I will suggest the next fragment: " Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points to negate the effect of 1 Trap Card that designates this card as a target. If 2 or more cards on your side of the field are designated by the effect of 1 Trap Card, you can banish this card from your field or Graveyard to negate the effect of the Trap Card and destroy it." The idea is original, a Synchro Trap destroyer, I never thought in one. [/quote] Thanks for the correction. I am glad you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 1 Warrior-Type Tuner+1 or more non-Tuner monsters As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot activate any Trap Cards during your turn, except when this card is attacking. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points to negate the effect of 1 Trap Card that designates this card as a target. If 2 or more cards on your side of the field are designated by the effect of 1 Trap Card, you can banish this card from your field or Graveyard to negate the effect of the Trap Card and destroy it. Pretty well negator, and still useful in the Graveyard also. Well done 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Nice little neat card we hav' here! ^^ I love the Trap manipulation, and negation aswell Nice job 9.4/10 It's like a half-way Jinzo xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [quote name='Venom' timestamp='1308807309' post='5304633'] Nice little neat card we hav' here! ^^ I love the Trap manipulation, and negation aswell Nice job 9.4/10 It's like a half-way Jinzo xD [/quote] Yeah I guess it is like Jinzo. Although at least you get to use your own Trap Cards with this card. I am glad you like it.[quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1308805246' post='5304591'] 1 Warrior-Type Tuner+1 or more non-Tuner monsters As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot activate any Trap Cards during your turn, except when this card is attacking. Once per turn, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 500 points to negate the effect of 1 Trap Card that designates this card as a target. If 2 or more cards on your side of the field are designated by the effect of 1 Trap Card, you can banish this card from your field or Graveyard to negate the effect of the Trap Card and destroy it. Pretty well negator, and still useful in the Graveyard also. Well done 9.5/10 [/quote] Thanks. I am glad everyone likes the card. Thanks for the correction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Maniac Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Yes, it's like Jinzo. But it is better and a I must want to put it in my deck! I don't stop to say GREAT card!!! 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [quote name='Luis Edmundo' timestamp='1308856842' post='5305628'] Yes, it's like Jinzo. But it is better and a I must want to put it in my deck! I don't stop to say GREAT card!!! 9.6/10 [/quote] Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [font="Arial"]Imagine what this card would look like if used in the Yu-Gi-Oh!, [i]GX[/i] or [i]5D's[/i] anime. That's how epic it is! ^^ Great card, Nightwing.[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted June 23, 2011 Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 Traps beware! We got a new sheriff in town Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2011 [quote name='ハネクリボー' timestamp='1308857202' post='5305640'] [font="Arial"]Imagine what this card would look like if used in the Yu-Gi-Oh!, [i]GX[/i] or [i]5D's[/i] anime. That's how epic it is! ^^ Great card, Nightwing.[/font] [/quote] Glad you like it. It seems this is one of my best cards that I have ever made.[quote name='xzMasteRzx' timestamp='1308858741' post='5305689'] Traps beware! We got a new sheriff in town [/quote] lol. So I take it you like the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
u raging? Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 is it just me or does the picture look like a native american... and we all know native americans were boss when it came to setting up traps. ahhh the sweet irony Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 OCG updated. Thanks Mr. Striker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 The pic looks great and matches the perfectly. OCG is fine. It's balanced and definitely useful. it looks great overall. 10/10 Very nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [quote name='darkstar_316' timestamp='1309138508' post='5313438'] The pic looks great and matches the perfectly. OCG is fine. It's balanced and definitely useful. it looks great overall. 10/10 Very nice card. [/quote] Thanks, I have been told that it needs a new name though. I am glad you like it. Thanks for the rating. I will update the actual card when I think of a new name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Max Darkness told me the card was OP'ed so I tried to make it more balanced. How is it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 I thought it was good the first time. Although now it's balanced for sure. I like the new name. Better than the first to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [quote name='darkstar_316' timestamp='1309179600' post='5314368'] I thought it was good the first time. Although now it's balanced for sure. I like the new name. Better than the first to be honest. [/quote] Yeah I also like the new name. It is catchy. I also like the original one, but since I am in the Card Making Academy I am trying to make my cards perfectly balanced. Note: Deceptus means Trap, so its real name is Trap Detector, but with Deceptus instead of Trap it makes it an alliteration making it more appealing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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