The Ultimate Monster

[Tydog1999]

[img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9137/436362.jpg[/img]

Lore: When this card is summoned you send half of your deck to the graveyard and then shuffle your deck. You must then banish half the cards from your graveyard. This cards attack is equal to 100x the Levels of the monsters remaining in your graveyard.

[Resident Fascist]

lolbad


Try again.

[ss2phil]

When this card is summoned send half of your deck to the graveyard and then shuffle it. You must then banish half of the cards in your graveyard. This card's Atk and Def are equal to the combined levels of the monsters remaining in your graveyard x 100.

I think with those OCG corrections, your card deserves a 10/10

I really like the originality of the effect btw!

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Well, I can see that this card is definitely overpowered, but I feel that it lacks a lot of drawbacks, plus, you really just need to use a card that lets you play 1 monster whose ATK is 1500 or less to play him. He is immune to Spells + Traps though, so at least he's not a Godmod of Destruction.

[b]OCG[/b]: The OCG, no offense, needs some work. Here's the correct Format: [i][b]"When this card is Summoned, count the remaining cards in your Deck. Then, send half of your Deck to the Graveyard and shuffle it. Count the cards in your Graveyard, then banish half of the cards in your Graveyard. You must banish at least 10 Monster Cards. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the combined levels of the monsters remaining in your graveyard x50."[/b][/i] I suppose that might somewhat balance it, but I still feel it is overpowered, most definitely.

[b]Artwork[/b]: I actually really admire the picture, but I feel it could have been used for something else. It looks like Anubis, and could possibly be a Beast-Warrior. That's my opinion of what it should have been used for.

[b]Effect[/b]: This card's effect was definitely overpowered, but I feel that if you lowered everything, and gave the requirement I issued, you could manage it.

[b]Creativity[/b]: I do like that someone decided to make a Divine-Beast, but I don't think you should make them, since people can be critics about them. :/

Overall Thought: This card has many flaws, but it can be corrected easy.

Continue with your Card Making,
MyStiK.