Kyng's Old Account Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Here is a 6 card archetype featuring the new OCG. These crds will also feature in an upcoming booster set I'll soon be making. Needless to say the Pics are Jazin Kay's. [img]http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/1791/150623z.jpg[/img][img]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/8327/150623d.jpg[/img][img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4576/150623l.jpg[/img][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/7633/150623.jpg[/img][img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/7884/150623gj.jpg[/img][img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/3144/150623b.jpg[/img] Lore for the Fusion guy: "Fu-Mech AN" + "Fu-Mech IH" + "Fu-Mech AL" + "Fu-Mech AT" + "Fu-Mech OR" Must be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by banishing the above cards you control. (You do not use "Polymerization".) You can discard 1 card from your hand to activate one of the following effects: *Switch the battle position of 1 monster your opponent controls. *At the End of the Battle Phase destroy all monsters that battled with this card. *You may draw 2 cards. *This card can attack all monsters your opponent control once each. *Tribute any number of monsters you control; destroy cards on the field equal to the number of monsters you tributed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 24, 2011 Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Looks pretty good, but the OCG needs work. I like the idea, but it's like the VWXYZ set; all of them form together to create an amazing monster. However, unlike the VWXYZ set, this set's cards help your field advantage. But, sadly, none of the cards support [b]each other[/b]. you should make support for them, like how XX-Sabers support X-Sabers. Maybe the support could spell ULTIMATE? but anyways, no need for all of the extra punctuation. I will correct any OCG errors your cards have. Pros of set: - Fuse together to make amazing monster - Cool theme - Low level, great for Synchros Cons of set: - Almost impossible to Summon the Fusion Monster (all cards have to be on field) - No support to get others onto field - Low ATK and DEF stats; can't be kept on field for long - Almost all decks don't use these types of cards (Ultimate monsters such as Five God Dragon, Blue-Eyes Ultimate Dragon, VWXYZ Dragon Cannon, etc.) [spoiler=Fu-Mech AN] When you control another Fu-Mech Monster you can change the battle position of 1 face-up Monster on the field. This effect can be used once per turn during either player's turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fu-Mech IH] When you control another Fu-Mech Monster, if this card is selected as an attack target, destroy all Monsters that battled with this card at the end of the Battle Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fu-Mech AL] When you control another Fu-Mech Monster during your Draw Phase, you can add the card from the bottom of your deck to your hand instead of drawing. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fu-Mech AT] When you control another Fu-Mech Monster this card can attack your opponent directly. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fu-Mech OR] When you control another Fu-Mech Monster you can tribute this card to destroy 1 card on the field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fu-Mech ANIHALATOR] "Fu-Mech AN" + "Fu-Mech IH" + "Fu-Mech AL" + "Fu-Mech AT" + "Fu-Mech OR" This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by banishing the above material Monsters on your side of the field (You do not use "Polymerization"). Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to activate one of the following effects: *Switch the battle position of 1 monster your opponent controls. *At the End of the Battle Phase destroy all monsters that battled with this card. *Draw 2 cards. *This card can attack all monsters your opponent control once each. *Tribute any number of monsters you control and destroy cards on the field equal to the number of monsters you tributed. [/spoiler] I changed the effect of Fu-Mech ANIHALATOR to Once per turn because you could do an infinite draw with his ability if you had one card in your hand, making the card extremely broken. All in all, a nice idea, but the creation still needs a little work. 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2011 Thanks for the very detailed advice. Support, yeah, I'll make some. But as for the OCG, the one I am using is the newest OCG to be used in July (according to Mr. Striker). Thanks for fixing, will get on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 25, 2011 Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 You're welcome! I've noticed that you put way too many semi-colons ( and colons ( in your cards. Semi-colons aren't used at all in real OCG and colons are only used for a choice effect (such as Fu-Mech ANIHALATOR). Try using more "and"s and commas (,). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted June 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2011 ...the colons and semi-colons are the New OCG in July, quote Mr Striker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirtyStan Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 Wow. Sadly, I already ranted about this a lot on another topic... But I understand the new OCG. Thank you! I might as well make new cards that compliment the new OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jurius Posted June 26, 2011 Report Share Posted June 26, 2011 Cards are great!! I guess it's for... 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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