Reddo kanmuri doragon kingu - furea

[Resident Fascist]

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While searching on Jazinkay's Archives for... Stuff, No really, I was just looking for stuff. I ended up clicking through the entire archive to see if I could find any Stuff, Like he/she had in the main album thing of his/hers, but didn't find any ): Anyways, I mad that you can't put Japanese in the card. So I sufficed for just the Phonetic for the name. The name in english is "Red-Crested Dragon King - Flare"

[Vough]

draw isn't capitalized I think.
And basicly the effect is a boosted Valkyrus, so perhaps change it and/or add other effects?

[~Shin~]

[spoiler=FIX]1 [b]Tuner[/b] + 1 or [b]more non-Tuner monsters[/b]
Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to [b]draw[/b] 1 card.[/spoiler]
Usefull but not original or interesting, it is balance still you may also make it less general or harder to summon. 4.4/10

Why did you post this card ? I mean what do you expect us to write ? maybe: good pic, I like the name, good effect or they should apple japanese.

[Max Darkness]

Romanji is never used as a written language, it's used as a go-between for Japanese and English. I'm guessing this is supposed to be something along the lines of "Red Dragon King - Fury", but it wouldn't look like that in Romanji anyway due to the fact 'Dragon King' is one word (Kingu-ryu) because of the way Japanese treats 'Dragon'.

As for the effect, it is incredibly dull and unoriginal. A picture like that deserves a better effect.