CMRenji Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [center]Haven't made a card in a while so I decided to make one today. CnC is appreciated. [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1460/145730u.jpg[/img] [b]When this card is Summoned; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the turn count x50. When this card is destroyed: You can banish it; add 1 "Scorching Scourge" from your Graveyard to your Deck. During your Standby Phase: You can discard 1 FIRE monster; select 1 of your banished cards and add it to your Graveyard. If you control 2 or more face-up "Scorching Scourges": Banish them: activate one of the following effects depending on how many cards were banished by this effect: -2: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the highest amount of damage you've inflicted in the past 5 turns. -3: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the highest amount of damage you've inflicted in the Duel.[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Oh. My God. I hate the new OCG Rules. Too many colons. Anyway...Nice to see you making cards again, Renji. Now, the card's effect is...Interesting. Definitely unique. And rather interesting as well. Good Burn and Return going there. I like 'em. 9.36/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 I know, I didn't like it either at first. Tristan helped me figure out how the new OCG works, and I've been practicing with it since. Thanks for the rate and comment man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Card looks great. Great burn ability and very unique. I will have to agree that I hate the new OCG and I think they should stick with the old one. Anyway good card, good OCG as far as I can tell. Nice to see a new card from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Thanks for the comment Nightwing. The new OCG is actually quite nice when you get used to using it. It's also fairly easy to learn and more efficient too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [font=Arial]Hey Renji, great card you got there dude. It's practically blazing with its heat! xD[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Why thank you, glad you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [quote name='◊Renji◊' timestamp='1309137059' post='5313387'] Thanks for the comment Nightwing. The new OCG is actually quite nice when you get used to using it. It's also fairly easy to learn and more efficient too. [/quote] I am glad to hear you say that because I was afraid that I would never be able to learn it, but now that you said that I have some hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 Can you please replace the semi-colons with "and"? Right now the effect doesn't flow. Also, last lines need rewording. Right now it seems as if the highest damage could mean "Oh, the highest damage you've had so far was when your LP were at 3700 which was 5300 damage so you take 5300 damage." Something more like "inflict damage to your opponent equal to the most damage they took from a single card effect of single attack". Finally a question. Why does this card need about 3 different effects? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 [quote name='Nightwing the Dark Falcon' timestamp='1309139788' post='5313494'] I am glad to hear you say that because I was afraid that I would never be able to learn it, but now that you said that I have some hope. [/quote] Yeah it's pretty easy to learn. It's basically "When: Cost; Effect" or "When; Effect" @Welche: The semicolons are used in the newest OCG(not in IcyBlue's Update) that should be officially out sometime in July I believe. That sounds like a good idea, might balance the card out a bit. Instead of a whole Battle Phase worth of damage, it's be just the damage from 1 monster's attack or 1 effect. I tried to link it's effects together to make it sort of Burn, Rinse, Repeat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted June 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2011 Gonna Bump this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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