world of disbelief

[❤ Lovely Warrior ❤]

so this is something i did for my deviant art yea its not that good and the spelling and grammar suck but i wanted to post it here anyway even though its not a fanfic so i dont lose it... and i only did chapter 1 and i am not planning on finishing chapter 2
[spoiler=chapter 1]
world of disbelief Chapter 1
by ~thesamaraigooble

Chapter 1: A new world of nightmares.

This is the story of a boy and his friends who go on an amazing adventure that's unlike any other. His name is Stein with his friends Marie, Dune, and Paren. For them it was just a normal day.
"Hey wait up" Stein said to Marie and Paren.
"What wrong stein" said Marie concerned!
"He probably wet his bed" said Paren jokingly.
"not funny Paren" said Stein upset please stop picking on me.
"why shrimp" said Paren jokingly.
Marie switching the subject said "so what did you want stein."
'Ohh I forgot because your boy friend was bullying me' stein said "its dune he's in trouble" he said concerned.
"why what's wrong" said Marie also concerned.
"Please fallow me me" Stein said.
Marie and Paren fallowed Stein to where dune was. Dune was a scrawny guy he wore big glasses and had a bowl cut. He actually looked kinda goofy.
"There he is" said stein
"whats wrong with him. Is he crying?" said Marie
"yea he is" said Stein
"ohh guys please help me" said dune crying
"Whats wrong" said Marie concerned even more
At that moment Dune held up a sheet of paper with a big "B" written on it.
"Whats that, some test" said Paren. Dune nodded and pointed the word "test" at the top.
"WHAT YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME" said Marie unamused "HERE I THINK YOU HURT OR TRAMATIZED BY SOMETHING BUT YOUR CRYING BECAUSE OF A STUPID B+ ON A TEST"
"I can't get Bs" said dune wiping tears away.
"WHY NOT" said Marie even more angered.
"B-b- because when I do" said dune even more upset "my mom sais I'm a bad son and locks me in a dark closet."
"That horrible" said stain "how often dose she do that"
"Very often I want it to stop but its my mom what should I do" said dune.
"Well dune y… " Marie said before she was interrupted by a strange sound.
"What on earth was that" said Paren surprised.
"I don't know" said stein
"Sounded like an explosion" said dune.
"Should we go check it out" said Marie "someone might be hurt".
"Yea" said Stein
So as the group headed in the direction of the sound they began to feel dizzy and tired.
"Ugh! I feel so funny" said Paren.
"oooh! I feel like I might vomit" Said Marie.
As they kept going a strange purple fog engulfed them making it harder to see and twice as hard to breath.
"Guys maybe we should turn baaaa…" said stein right before he passed out.
"Oh no steiiii…" Marie said as she to passed out.
"I'm getting out of here" said paren "sorry Marie but I will have tooooo…" said paren passing out
"AAAAAAAAI GOT TO RUnnn…" said dune right before he passed out.
When the gang woke up they found themselves in a strange town. There was normal looking people there but the sky was red and the houses and streets were twisted and strange looking. Not knowing where they were the four was frightened and didn't know what to do.
"Where are we?" said Stein confused.
" I must be going insanity," said Dune
"This place looks like something from a bad Halloween movie" said Marie very confused.
"AAAAAAAAAA" screamed Paren sounding truly terrified.
"What is it Paren see your reflection" said Stein sarcastically.
"G… g…. GUYS LOOK AT THIS!" screamed Paren sounding even more scared than before.
The three looked back and to there surprise saw a scarecrow like looking man with long razor like claws he had no pupils and razor sharp teeth.
"w. W… WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!" screamed Marie?
The creature jumped into the air getting ready to attack the kids with his claws when what seemed out of nowhere a great black fireball hit him.
"Get back what are you stupid!" a mysterious female voice said
Almost petrified the four looked back to find nothing but a small purple cat.
"Who the hell said that!" said Marie now crying.
"I did" the cat said as she walked towards them.
"Are you going to attack us to!" said Stein starting to stand up.
"GET DOWN!" the cat yelled.
At that moment the scarecrow looking creature tried to attack Stein. Acting fast the cat attacked the creature scratching its face turning into dust.
"What was that miss kitty."? Said Dune.
"Shhh… hold on one seconded." Said the cat as an enormous red orb lifted from the monster.
"What is that?" Paren asked curiously.
"Curious as a cat I see." Said the cat " I can see you are not from around here."
"I guess you can say that," said Stein.
"If you aren't from around here where did you come from?" asking the cat just as curious as Paren.
" Well were from earth apparently we left?" said Paren being sarcastic.
"Earth?" the cat said "you must follow me now" the cat said as she ran off
The four having no choice decided to follow her.
"Where are you taking us?" said Marie confused
"You will find out soon enough" said the cat sounding incredibly more serious than ever, ohh and by the way my name is Blair Boobwinsky, not that you asked or anything but you can just call me b.b." she said
"ohh" guess it didn't seem to important im sorry" Marie said apologetically.
" Its fine I understand" b.b. Said "where here" she said smiling or what seemed to be a smile.
She led them into a pumpkin shaped house.
"Is this your place" said Paren "looks cool, but how do you live in a house like this if you're just a cat?"
"OHHH, oops guess I should change back now." B.b. said winking. Then in a puff of pink smoke a very beautiful young woman came out of the smoke she looked in her early twenties, she had dark purple hair that was short she kept her cat like face and ears it was hard to tell if she had human ear since her hair covered it up. She wore a black tube dress had black bracelets on a witches hat with a swirl at the tip. But her most striking feature that the boys noticed right away was her enormous breasts.

"well lets get started" she said winking…



"Where are we?" Dune asked
"Where in my lab." b.b. Said giggling a little.
"Uhh not to be rude but this just looks like a normal house, sort of," said Paren
"Huh really?" b.b. Said, "black pumpkin pumpy" she chanted a large hole appeared on the floor and the five fell into it. They fell for a long time it seamed but after a few seconds landed on the floor with a loud THUD!!
"Owwie" Marie said
"Baby" Paren said jokingly
"Shut up" Marie said angrily.
"Okay time to get to business," said b.b.
"Wait answer our questions first," said Stein angrily
"Say please first" b.b. Said laughing
"Please" Stein said embarrised
"Okay, you are in the town of hallows a simple town nice pleasant quite" b.b. Said smiling
"You call what just happened quit and peaceful" Paren said sarcastically.
"Yes that what you just saw was a human who decided to sell his soul to the shinigami the lord of death most of the time they are simple to beat but some time if the person was strong spirited as a human they will be incredibly powerful. We call these monsters shinikiddo which just means death kid." She said very seriously "the reason I brought you here is because its rare to find people from earth here you must have been special my guess would be that tentai-kun brought you here because he saw you had special unawakened powers that other humans didn't have but it seems they haven't awakened yet."
"What do you mean powers?" Marie asked.
"Not sure exactly what powers you have but I scense that you have amatsu souls which is rare even for this world so I can see why he wanted you here." She said "I think its time for me to take you to him, pa pa pumpkin tele" a bright light engulfed them and they disappeared.
There was this bright light that engulfed them. Once the light started to fade they saw that they were in what looked like a dungeon.
"this place gives me the creeps." Said Marie scared.
"don't worries there is nothing to be afraid of I have to come here it a lot its actually a very safe place to be." Said b.b. reassuring her
"whats that" asking stein pointing to a bright light off in the distance.
"why that's tentai-kun silly" said b.b.
they waited there as the light got closer once it got close enough they could tell it was a woman.
"wait I thought you said that it was a guy not some broad" said Paren bored
"oops I did i always get her and her husband confused they have the same name and I usually don't know wich one is here so I just say he just in case" b.b. said trying to figure out a better way to describe it.
"blair where did you find these four" said the lady once she got close enough. She was a thin woman about the same height as b.b. she had on a sun dress but no shoes, she had her hair tied into a bun with a thin little pale blue bun, she had on a mask over her face the mask had big blue eyes and ruby read mask.
"I see you notice my mask young one" tentai-kun said to dune.
"I do but I thought it would be rude to ask so I didnt" dune said blushing
"ohh young one don't be shy, I would love to take my mask off but I cant" she said
"why" dune asked curiously
"I cant tell you that" she said softly
"ohh sorry" he said
"now to business, b.b. where did you find these four" she said
" I found them in an ally about to be attacked by a shinikiddo" b.b. said
"hmmm, okay you four I can sense that the four of you have amatsu souls. These are very powerfull I am going to give you a onetime offer you can come with me and I can teatch you haw to unlock your powers." entai-kun said
"this is to crazy I just wana go home." Said paren
"I cant send you home but I can lead you out of town and you can leave this place. But after that I can not say you will be safe." entai-kun said
"ill take my chances" said Paren
"Paren you cant go what will you do if one of those things attack you" Marie said concerned.
"ill find a way to protect myself" he said
"are you sure you want to go?" entai-kun asked.
"yea so let me go im not getting any younger." Paren
"as you you wish" she said. Right then a door opend up and inside is what looked like a dessert. Paren started walking through.
"Paren wait if you go then I am going with you." Marie said
"sorey Marie not tagalongs" Paren said as the door shut behind him.
"NOOOOO" marie yealled as she fell to her knees crying "Paren you are the worst boyfriend any girl has ever had" she said crying
"would you like to go with him?" entai-kun asked Marie
"no I think it would be best if I stayed here"
"now that that is out of the way follow me." entai-kun said.[/spoiler]