Creedaman Posted June 27, 2011 Report Share Posted June 27, 2011 was messing around one day and got the idea for a card. that one card just happen to lead to this full set. let me kno what you think of it. [spoiler=Monsters] [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/5083/395150n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/4766/395150h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4892/395150k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/9630/395150.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=spells][img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/2607/395150c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7135/395150e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8440/395150f.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps][img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/13/395150q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9630/395150.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchro][img]http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8639/395150l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/9630/395150.jpg[/img] [img]http://img848.imageshack.us/img848/6007/395150r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9630/395150.jpg[/img] by weaponry i mean equipped or has a weapon[/spoiler] i may still edit this set by adding some cards or editing.any advise would be greatly appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuzzpupp Posted June 30, 2011 Report Share Posted June 30, 2011 Good job!!!!Fav is Bio Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 The wording is off on a lot of the cards but that's fixable. Bio King is broken if anything his first effect is enough to be good but the other one is too much he can potentially gain 4500 attack and attack twice just fro starters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted July 19, 2011 Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Remove From play = Banish Your regular monsters have boring effects man... Just summon or can attack twice. Add a little more spice.. Bio Amp is another Megamorph except without a cost. OPed. Idk if it's just me. But Bio Core's OCG is off.. With Bio in the making. Add "Bio Prototype" Bio shield is OPED. Especially that it's an equip card that can negate 3 attacks whenever. Bio space has a different effect. But unaffected by Spells or Trap cards makes it OPed. Bio strike can be OPed because your "Bio" monsters have swarm effects. I don't think Trap cards can be equip cards With Bio Vengence, make the summoned monster destroyed Until the End Phase. Bio Dragon make it Once per Turn: during your Main Phase, in the beginning Bio King is OPed big time. Bio Master is the only one that doesn't bother me... Just make it gain 200 ATK for each one. Bio Weapon is like a Legendary Fiend, except with an effect that destroys spells and traps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lvl1hero Posted July 20, 2011 Report Share Posted July 20, 2011 [u]OCG[/u] = [b]Needs Fixing[/b] [i]Most of your card's lores/effects need a touch up on their [u]OCG[/u] (original card grammar), but its up to you if you want to fix it. Your cards are somewhat pretty understandable, but OCG is a pretty big thing when it comes to making cards "realistic".[/i] [u]Images[/u] = [b]Good[/b] [i]Again, not an important matter, but it does have affect people's liking to the card... though this part is highly overrated by some people.[/i] [u]Overall Rating[/u]: [b]6.5/10[/b] [[i]Nice set of cards... could use a bit of touch up for it to be better[/i]] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted July 21, 2011 Report Share Posted July 21, 2011 needs OCG fixing, but desireable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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