MibeR Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 [center][img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/7994/203203.jpg[/img] "Unknown Synchron" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Must be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon. Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up monster you control, except this card; that targeted monster gains 500 ATK and inflicts Piercing Battle Damage, until the End Phase. This card cannot attack if you activate this effect. Once per either player's turn: You can banish 1 Spell and 1 Trap Card from your Graveyard and target 1 face-up monster on the field; flip it into face-down Defense Position. Constructive criticism get a rep. [color="#00FF00"]All +rep for me is appreciated and get a rep in return[/color] BECAUSE I LOVE BOOK OF MOON[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LRPXD Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 "Unknown Warrior" The picture is sick really does look like something a Unknown Synchron will morph into. OCG looks good can't comment in that department since mines is horrendous. But I would change "Must be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon." into "This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon." Because I made a similar mistake and someone fix'd it. Moving on to the effects of the card hmm... some creative ideas there making a card inflict piercing damage seems cool but I would restrict that to only face-up monsters. Flipping a card face-down another interesting idea it would be great for flip effect monsters you control but not much a game changer but still pretty different which is good. 8.5/10 great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [quote]Must be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon." into "This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Synchro Summon." [/quote] That is new OCG rules, as for the target face-up. Maybe you right i take that part. Thank you overall, ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 bRING MY POST UP.. Sundul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 "Twice per duel: You can banish 1 Spell and 1 Trap Card from your Graveyard and target 1 face-up monster on the field; flip it into face-down Defense Position." Why only twice per duel? I see you can use this more than that, just make it like once every other turn and that should be reasonable enough 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Make it once per turn will turn this card into Broken One. Y know Book of Moon every turns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 I didn't say make it once per turn though I only said more than twice per duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 3 times maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1310514024' post='5349744'] 3 times maybe? [/quote] It being once per turn would be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 So you say it is still fine though it is once per either player's turn? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1310514024' post='5349744'] 3 times maybe? [/quote] That should be fine with me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 Im going to change it once per turn. If anybody reject this? Say your opinion why i mustnt? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 I thought you said once per turn is too much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310576134' post='5351565'] I thought you said once per turn is too much [/quote] And I thought you could actually post a post that is, well, constructive. GUESS I WAS WRONG! Seriously, don't just ask why the person changed his or her mind if you're not going to say anything that supports or doesn't support what said person did. But alas, you're ragnarok. I would understand if a simple minded peasant like yourself doesn't understand the meaning behind my words. I pity you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 Artwork: 8 - Blurry, but cool concept. Balance: 10 - Not OP or UP. Lore (Effect) : 8 - Very creative effect. Not OP or UP OCG (Official Card Grammar): 7 - [quote=Maha Guns]Must be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon[/quote] How it all Fits Together: 8 - This makes a very cool card. Card (The Average of the all Above): 8.2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote]But alas, you're ragnarok. I would understand if a simple minded peasant like yourself doesn't understand the meaning behind my words. I pity you. [/quote] Power Play please dont flaming anybody kay? We all learner here. I change my mind and take PowerPlay suggestion because yeah. Our Trap Card+ Spell is banished. Meaning sacrifice 2 cards to activate this. And Level 7 for a Unknown Synchron can be achived with Quilbolt help. So rather hard to Summon this. And reconsidered its playability Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 I like this card, to bad it can't pick itself, but still really good! 8/10 P.S Wicked pic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 It still pick itself y know? face-up monster? BTW thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 but it says "This monster cannot attack if it activates its effect, therefore, he can pick himself, but his own effect says he can't attack, thus picking him would be pointless... did you typo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 I thought you argue about the Book of Moon effect, But yet,, it still cant pick himself a target. Yes, but cant attack. Meaning you not targeting this card, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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