ZURRIKU Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 [img]http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6781/143102.jpg[/img] Edit:Could someone give me a better template the one in card maker is sorta bad compared to everyone elses ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SNASHU Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 I think it is good and would rate it a 8/10. I cant see anything wrong with it appart from a few left out commars and fullstops i think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 For a newbie (no offense lol) this is a good card. A few OCG errors, but i'll help... instead of telling you about the whole OCG thing, I'll just write your effect: It should say: [i]If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, select 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot activate its effect until your opponent's next End Phase.[/i] Overall, good Tuner card... could be [b]really[/b] useful to criple your opponent's monster(s) for a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZURRIKU Posted July 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 Thats what i was asking for just a simple OCG fix ._. like the commas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dylanx0199 Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 nice, this would go good in my dark deck :0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inexplicable Madness Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 You're using the old OCG... the link to the new OCG is this: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/250644-konami-new-card-grammar-rules/ Also part of the new OCG that I believe is not mentioned is that commas are now colons ( or when suggesting the variable for an effect to commence... The price of an effect is separated from the final effect by a semicolon ( Really like the pic and the effect is beast especially with fixes 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 For future reference, post Lore so OCG fixes are easier. OT: Card overall looks good. Pic, name, and effect work together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZURRIKU Posted July 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 Yay im a success Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 [quote name='Inexplicable Madness' timestamp='1310111990' post='5337441'] You're using the old OCG... [/quote] Oh yeah... [i][b]I[/b][/i] forgot about that lol... It should say!: [b]If this card is used for a Synchro Summon[u]: S[/u]elect 1 Effect Monster your opponent controls. The selected monster cannot activate its effect until your opponent's next End Phase.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 it's just a temporary skill drain card, but that's fine for an early card the effect is very balanced out, so I'll give you 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZombieDeath98 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 It's pretty balanced and the picture is nice so i would give it a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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