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Insect Card for 'Piercing Battle Damage' -- Giant Crawling Piercer

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i just felt like giving support to Insects for a change... and this is my creation!
A very simple effect that uses the new OCG :)

[img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3057/390021h.jpg[/img]
Lore:
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If this card destroys a Defense Position monster by battle: Inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed by battle while it is in Defense Position: Your opponent takes the piercing Battle Damage.
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as usual, artwork credit goes to: JazinKay

It's effect explains its stats, high ATK, weak DEF.
Hope you like it
Plz rate and give feedback :D

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[quote name='Max Darkness' timestamp='1310324589' post='5343382']
2000 ATK is too high for a Level 4 Effect Monster; and its second effect is pretty overpowered. And "Cross-Sword Beetle" already fulfills this card's role.
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Well, THIS card can do the Piercing Damage to ANY monster... but i get what ur saying...

I lowered the ATK to a reasonable Lv 4 monster and removed some of the OP'd ness by rasing the DEF...
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The img looks more like an Aqua-Type then an Insect, but ok.
Well it certainly does pierce. However it is outmatched by "Cross-Sword Beetle" seeing as it allows all your insects to pierce.
It's 2nd effect reminds me somewhat of an "Amazoness Swords Woman", but then less usefull. Seeing as it will mostly remain in Attack Position.

Overal it's an ok card, nothing extraordenary though.

A 6.7/10
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[quote name='Six Samz 500' timestamp='1310490202' post='5348338']
hi i dont know weather this is right these days but can you just put "piercing damage" on an effect as the correct OCG.
just asking :lol:
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no... sorry, but here's why:
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/250644-konami-new-card-grammar-rules/

[quote name='Icyblue' timestamp='1306276847' post='5229741']
Old:
During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.
New:
If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.
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It's gunna have to stay PBD. But now looking at it again, I think I'll make the P in Piercing in the card's lore a lower case :P

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[quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1310321900' post='5343289']
i just felt like giving support to Insects for a change... and this is my creation!
A very simple effect that uses the new OCG :)

[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/6527/390021i.jpg[/img]
Lore:
[b][size="4"]
If this card destroys a Defense Position monster by battle: Inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed by battle while it is in Defense Position: Your opponent takes the piercing Battle Damage.
[/size][/b]
as usual, artwork credit goes to: JazinKay

It's effect explains its stats, high ATK, weak DEF.
Hope you like it
Plz rate and give feedback :D
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OCG fix:

This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card is destroyed while in Defense Position: Your opponent takes damage equal to the difference between this Monster's DEF and the attacking Monster's ATK.

Other than that, good card.

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[quote name='Neos the Ancient' timestamp='1310497570' post='5348742']
OCG fix:

This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card is destroyed while in Defense Position: Your opponent takes damage equal to the difference between this Monster's DEF and the attacking Monster's ATK.

Other than that, good card.
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thanks for liking the card
i'll look into changing the OCG

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[quote name='Darkplant - PAIN' timestamp='1310527195' post='5350259']
[color="#FF0000"][size="7"][b]THE RC SECTION IS STUPID.[/b][/size][/color]

I order you to change its ATK back to 2000.
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I'll THINK about changing it to 2000... it's just that it's a tad OP'd
and please, don't spam! I don't care if you think this forum section is stupid, just don't post it

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[quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1310527656' post='5350276']
I'll THINK about changing it to 2000... it's just that it's a tad OP'd
and please, don't spam! I don't care if you think this forum section is stupid, just don't post it
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The internet likes to emphasize your statement by killing other peoples'.

Well, it's not gonna be OP at all. Believe me, I know what I'm talking about. No one will still run it over Rai-Oh, or Kycoo, or Stratos, or Doomcaliber, or whatever other low-level beatstick they have in metabeat.

Insects need this.

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[quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310529785' post='5350363']
It seems whenever someone makes an awesome card, its op'd and you have to slap a divine sticker on it!
i love this card, and im very jelous that I didn't make it! ;p
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well, thanks for the comment and thanks a lot for enjoying the card :D
+Rep for being nice and sending me the message ;)

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