Night Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 [center] Ohyes i did make this from scratch. NW + Abby + Pen tool + 100% scratched + decent attempt at lighting/shadows and depth + 2 days of work = [IMG]http://i882.photobucket.com/albums/ac28/Amirzmom/NWForcefullyInserted.png[/IMG] cnc mates. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 bump -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 [font="'Comic Sans MS"][color="#00ff00"]I don't like the edges on the lines, they're too sharp...[/color][/font] [font="'Comic Sans MS"][color="#00ff00"]Also, one thing that bothered me is the way the right part of the left yellow line connects with the orb...There is a line there (accidentally?) that suggests that the line is cutting into the orb...Actually, the only spot I liked the connection of orb and line is the left part of the yellow line...Try making them all similar to that...[/color][/font] [font="'Comic Sans MS"][color="#00ff00"]Finally, there is too much and too distinct blur on every line apart from the far green one, where it looks right...[/color][/font] [font="'Comic Sans MS"][color="#00ff00"]But, overall, I likez [/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 you need to tone down on what looks to be your overlaying layers. The pixels build up and they cause those extremely choppy lines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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