Apollyon Oricalcos Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 Ok people this is my first card. its effect says If Gabriella Oricalcos is in the field or graveyard you can special summon this card from your hand. This Card cannot be destroyed. Once per turn you can choose one of these effects and use it . Choose one card on the field and destroy it . Draw 2 cards . Gain 1000 life points . Special summon a monster from your hand deck or graveyard Now before you say it cant be destroyed so its broken.....it cant be destroyed but it can be banished! Im open to suggestions on how to improve it so feel free to rate and comment. [img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/4548/447395.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 No attachments if you want to post a card, click the card in the card maker and paste the code that appears below it into the thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Oricalcos Posted July 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 [quote name='~Burning Soul~' timestamp='1310412354' post='5345878'] No attachments if you want to post a card, click the card in the card maker and paste the code that appears below it into the thread [/quote] ok fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 demon isn't a real type Certainly Draw 2 cards is OPed yes you say it can be banished, but more likely people will go for the destroyed option first if available, so therefore it's still broken 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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