Apollyon Oricalcos Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4548/447395.jpg[/img] Any feed back would be greatly appriciated i fixed up the grammar errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 The effect is kinda plain and it sure needs a lot of work to activate, but here is what I can help you with: [u][size="3"][b]1) Card Grammar:[/b][/size][/u] [i]1 [b]T[/b]uner + 1 or more [b]non-Tuner[/b] monsters This card gains 1000 [b]ATK and DEF[/b] for every "Diglett" in your [b]G[/b]raveyard.[/i] [u][b][size="3"]2) Effect:[/size][/b][/u] Should be more creative (well, that's what people are usually looking for anyway). In this case you can use so many things just by sticking to Diglett's abilities and so. [size="3"][u][b]3) Picture:[/b][/u][/size] It's good. I like the way it looks! I'm not into Pokemon, but I always thought Diglett was just a potato-like creature, just a head. Anyhow, as I can see you have only 4 posts I suppose that's one of your first cards, maybe the very first So I can say that it's not bad at all! You just need to try making it even better! Good luck! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Oricalcos Posted July 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 [quote name='NeosWiseman' timestamp='1310417806' post='5346098'] The effect is kinda plain and it sure needs a lot of work to activate, but here is what I can help you with: [u][size="3"][b]1) Card Grammar:[/b][/size][/u] [i]1 [b]T[/b]uner + 1 or more [b]non-Tuner[/b] monsters This card gains 1000 [b]ATK and DEF[/b] for every "Diglett" in your [b]G[/b]raveyard.[/i] [u][b][size="3"]2) Effect:[/size][/b][/u] Should be more creative (well, that's what people are usually looking for anyway). In this case you can use so many things just by sticking to Diglett's abilities and so. [size="3"][u][b]3) Picture:[/b][/u][/size] It's good. I like the way it looks! I'm not into Pokemon, but I always thought Diglett was just a potato-like creature, just a head. Anyhow, as I can see you have only 4 posts I suppose that's one of your first cards, maybe the very first So I can say that it's not bad at all! You just need to try making it even better! Good luck! ^^ [/quote] Thanks yea i just started making cards recently diglett is actually my third one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted July 11, 2011 Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 Yea I agree with Neos with the grammer. Plus that picture is f***ing hilarious!! This made my day . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snyperfox2003 Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 also you might want to put all of your cards into one post insted of having several ones. well cards that have relevance to eachother. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 Try toning down on the ATK and effect, it's a bit too OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
infinitysqrd Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 .... Diglet has a body?! I am at a loss. This changed my views of Diglet thats for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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