Baragan Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/9237/131834.jpg[/img] LORE: This card can only be Special Summoned or Set, by banishing from play a number of cards x the number of cards in your hand. In your oponents Main Phase inflict damage to your oponents Life Points equal the card number banished from play x300. In the end of your Damage Step, put this card card on the top of your deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 Well, for starters, if that is original artwork, well done! I really like to see original style! Now, OCG Fix: [b][u]What you wrote:[/u][/b] This card can only be Special Summoned or Set, by banishing from play a number of cards x the number of cards in your hand. In your oponents Main Phase inflict damage to your oponents Life Points equal the card number banished from play x300. In the end of your Damage Step, put this card card on the top of your deck. [b][u]What you should write:[/u][/b] This card can only be Normal Summoned or Set by banishing from play a number of cards equal to the number of cards in your hand (including or excluding this card?). During your opponents Main Phase inflict damage to your oponent equal the card number banished from play x300. During the end of your Damage Step, send this card card to the top of your Deck. Ok, what you are trying to portray isn't very clear to me. I think you meant you must Normal Summon, rather than Special Summon. Also it's effect is ok, but I tink it could be overpowered. Imagine you've played Infinite Cards and have about Ten in your hand excluding/including him. That means 3000 damage. But it has low ATK and DEF, so I think it balances it out. I like the name "Engine Samurai". I also think this card is worth no less than 8/10. My opinion is it's a worthy 8.6/10. You need to practise on OCG really, but otherwise it's pretty decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 don't say Warrior and Machine in the type choose one, then say in the lore it's also treated as the other overall though, I'm unsure of the burn effect is even worth it I would have made it *600 instead or something 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote]This card can only be Special Summoned or Set, by banishing from play a number of cards x the number of cards in your hand. In your oponents Main Phase inflict damage to your oponents Life Points equal the card number banished from play x300. In the end of your Damage Step, put this card card on the top of your deck. [/quote] Am i the only one who confused after read this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 what are you confused about, Maha? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 ah ok XD thanks for helpingand , yes it is own artwork Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 and it's very good, if I was rating art alone you'd get at least 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 Oh thanks , too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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