bocaa Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [img]http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/6928/451366.jpg[/img] [u]NAME[/u] [i]Dark Lady Warrior[/i] [u]EFFECT[/u] [i]If this cards attacks an opponent's monster, this card gains 400 ATK during the Damage Step only; then draw three cards and descard two cards.[/i]Submit pleasesubmit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 First off it's OP. A 1900ATK monster that gains 400 ATk when attacking, then afterward Graceful Charity's effect... Graceful Charity is banned for a reason. The pic is okay. The name is good. The OCG needs a little work. I won't rate it for now. Oh and you spelled Discard wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 He can change that to "Draw one card". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 The rule of 2000... [quote]The "Rule of 2000 ATK" is a general rule that applies to Level 4 or lower Monster Cards; it states that once Monster Cards get to 1900 ATK, to go further, to 2000 and beyond, Special Conditions had to apply to the monster to limit the card. [/quote] [quote]If this cards attacks an opponent's monster, this card gains 400 ATK during the Damage Step only.[/quote] These two are complete contradictory. Granted it is an effect that lets you gain 400 ATK, but your base attack is already at 1900. If you wanted to keep this effect and make it seem more realistic (that is, if you want it to be realistic), I would cut the ATK down to at least 1600 or 1700, and make the Damage Step Boost only 300 ATK. There are a lot of cards that have this similar effect (Jain, Lightsworn Paladin, Crystal Beast Tiger, etc.), but having a high amount of ATK to start with and then totaling out 2300 attack during the Damage Step? Even some level 5 monsters can't stand up to that. [quote]Afterwards, draw 3 cards and discard 2 cards.[/quote] OCG fix. 1. Graceful Charity effect. Banned for a reason. It gives the player too much draw power and discard power. It would be useful to run this in Fableds/Dark Worlds, but you would have to tone it down A LOT before that can ever happen. (Maybe draw 2, discard 1) 2. This effect happens during the Battle Phase (from what I understand). If you were running said Fableds/Dark Worlds with this card's effect right now, you could potentially Summon any combination of Level 5 "Dark World" Monsters, which have 2300 ATK. Two more direct attacks from those monsters and you win. That's blatantly "cheating". Again, it would behoove you to cut down the draw/discard effect to make it seem more realistic (it is the realistic card forum for a reason). Well, I think that's all I have to say. I thank the two years that I have been plaing Yu-Gi-Oh for correcting OCG, and also the twelve "years" of English classes I took throughout my schooling. I don't rate single cards, so you're off the hook. I'll have to come up with some grading system soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 draw 3 and discard 2 is nothing more than Graceful Charity's effect personally I would have said you can only draw ONE and discard two so it balances out better 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Why not 2 cards like Pot of Greed instead ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 hmm 1900 ATK and gains 400 when it attacks. I think you should increase the level then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1310946956' post='5364234'] Why not 2 cards like Pot of Greed instead ? [/quote] personally this is why I still feel Pot of Greed is too much draw power Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bocaa Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 ok... tell me about this [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/6928/451366.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Synchro can be revived easily, it is kinda new but NOpe sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='bocaa' timestamp='1310968100' post='5365261'] ok... tell me about this [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/6928/451366.jpg[/img] [/quote] Unimpressive you need to give it effects while it's on the field or it's way too UPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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