Lexadin Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [center]After a short break, I have decided to continue re-vamping old contest cards of mine. This time I'm doing a special "Cosmic" monster. That, if played well, can be a new trump of the "Aliens". I can only remember where I got 1 of the imgs from, so I'll only put img credit next to that card. [img]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/8593/20638.jpg[/img] [i]Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower monster on your field; Inflict 600 damage to your opponent. If this card is destroyed and send to the Graveyard: You can select 1 "Collapsed Plama Cannon" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard and place it on the field.[/i] [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/8593/20638.jpg[/img] [i]Must be placed on the field by the effect of "Laser Guidance Blaster". Once per turn: You can discard 1 "Alien" monster; Send 1 card on the field and 1 card in your opponent's hand to the Graveyard OR inflict 1000 damage. When this card is leaves the field: You can Special Summon 1 "Cosmic Executioner Kalumkor'ur" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard to the field.[/i] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9443/20638t.jpg[/img] [size="1"]Img by Wanderley (or Buddha. as he's called now).[/size] [i]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by the effect of "Collapsed Plasma Cannon", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of your opponent's Spell, Trap, and Monster Cards. Once per turn: by discarding 1 "Alien" monster; Destroy all other non-"Alien" cards on the field OR inflict damage to you opponent equal to the amount A-Counters on the field x 600. This card cannot declare an attack the turn this card's effect was activated.[/i] Yes you need 2 other cards to Summon it, however it's quite powerfull though limited to the Aliens. [size="1"]Any posts with less then 6 words will be considered spam, and will be treated as such. Any comments about OCG must be accompied with the correct fix unless it's already given in a previous post.[/size] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 for Executioner, the burn effect is a little bit too much since it applies to ALL cards I can easily see this burning your opponent well over the 6000 mark Maybe tune it to no more than 350 burn per card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/d/dc/MassDriverDR1-EN-C-UE.jpg [/img] Banned? FTK Frogs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310928482' post='5363454'] for Executioner, the burn effect is a little bit too much since it applies to ALL cards I can easily see this burning your opponent well over the 6000 mark Maybe tune it to no more than 350 burn per card? [/quote] You need to use 2 cards to Summon it, 1 card that can only be activated by the first one if the first one happens to be destroyed. Second card works pretty much the same, other than it has to leave the field so you could use its effect to Summon the monster. This brings me to the point I'm making here, the burn isn't "a little bit too much", because the monster is pretty much impossible to Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1310947680' post='5364259'] [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/d/dc/MassDriverDR1-EN-C-UE.jpg [/img] Banned? FTK Frogs? [/quote] You obviously only skimmed its effect, otherwise you would've noticed the "Once per turn" part. FTK Frogs only worked because "Mass Driver" works an infinate number of times per turn. [quote name='Power Play' timestamp='1310949452' post='5364318'] You need to use 2 cards to Summon it, 1 card that can only be activated by the first one if the first one happens to be destroyed. Second card works pretty much the same, other than it has to leave the field so you could use its effect to Summon the monster. This brings me to the point I'm making here, the burn isn't "a little bit too much", because the mobster is pretty much impossible to Summon. [/quote] Exactly what I was aiming for. Seeing as you need to get rid of both those cards before it becomes playable. I try to justify it by giving it a nuking/heavy Burn effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Oh my bad, i didnt see Once per turn at the first glance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 That is why you need to read the card's at least twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Not sure why you connected this to Aliens...it has nothing to do with them except their names being in the text. And you were aiming for the monster being almost impossible to summon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Well all of the trump cards of the "Alien" archetype, were named "Cosmic [titel] [name with ']" So that explains the name. An... *slams head into desk* Go...shdarnit! I totaly forgot about A-Counters, how the heck could I forget about them? I'll probebly edit these some more. Well I wasn't aiming that it was nearly impossible to Summon, just quite difficould. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Yea I gathered the name reference but I was wondering why id didn't deal with A-Counters or field control. Anyways, I was wondering because you said that you were aiming for what Zanda Panda said about the card's summoning being "pretty much impossible". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 The A-Counter part is being helped, but the field control. Well most "Alien" trumps are more distructive so I though I'd use that aswell. I gues I thought he was exaggerating. I do have some problems to note when someone does so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Well the destruction helps with field control but aliens have a lot of Brain Control, forbidden lance kind of stuff to. The destruction is good and I'm not saying force in some field control but yea making it more alien would be good. Adding A-Counters should help out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Well I took the liberty of editing it some more, I made the burn A-Counters x 600 & I made the nuke so that Aliens are spared. I hope this will do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ragnarok1945 Posted July 28, 2011 Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 well if you add another card here I'd be happy to rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2011 Nah, it's fine I guess. *sigh* [size="1"]Stupid lack of commenters.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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