Glogatha Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [img]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/6710/442447.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Lore:']This card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 3 Dragon-Type monsters from your hand . When this card destroys a moster on your opponent's side of the field: It is banished. When this monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points: Select 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field; call it either "Spell" or "Trap". Your opponent must then reveal the selected card. If you called the card correctly: Banish all cards in your opponents Graveyard of that type. If you guess wrong: Banish all cards in your hand and Graveyard of that type. When this card is destroyed: Banish it.[/spoiler] I need someone to comment on this, I know there are plenty of things wrong with it! (bump) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 ok, first off, why would you want to banish cards in your own graveyard for being a good guesser? and its basically the same thing with guessing wrong! i dont get it... [b]This card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 3 Dragon-Type monsters [u]...[/u] . When this card destroys a moster on your opponent's side of the field: It is banished. When this monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points: Select 1 Set Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field; call it either "Spell" or "Trap". Your opponent must then reveal the selected card. If you called the card correctly: Banish all cards in your Graveyard of that type. If you guess wrong: Banish all cards in your hand and Graveyard of that type. When this card is destroyed: Banish it.[/b] the underlined part is where i want you too add something.. you're saying banish 3 dragons, but from where? - "banishing 3 Dragon-Type monsters from your hand." - "banishing 3 Dragon-Type monsters from your Graveyard." - "banishing 3 Dragon-Type monsters from your side of the field." Grrr at long effects... and i think i made this longer! o well... 8/10 ... i was a tad confused, and i had to read the effect over again EDIT: I forgot to tell you what the 3 dots ment... i fixed it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote name='BFG Studios' timestamp='1310931991' post='5363600'] ok, first off, why would you want to banish cards in your own graveyard for being a good guesser? and its basically the same thing with guessing wrong! i dont get it... Grrr at long effects... and i think i made this longer! o well... <BR><BR>EEEPPP!!!<BR>huge mistake, but its fixed now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 dont forget to fix the "..." sorry. but i forgot to tell u what those ment in my first post whoopsy btw, what was the supposedly huge mistake? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 The huge mistake was me putting "Banish all cards in your graveyard" instead of "Banish all cards in your opponents graveyard! <BR><BR>and I still didn't fix it! grrrr!!!! <BR><BR>okay, mission complete, but I've ruined this thread... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFG Studios Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 [quote name='Shattered Sky' timestamp='1310933113' post='5363646'] The huge mistake was me putting "Banish all cards in your graveyard" instead of "Banish all cards in your opponents graveyard! and I still didn't fix it! grrrr!!!! [/quote] you mean "[b]Banish all cards in your opponent's Graveyard[/b]"... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varionius Posted July 17, 2011 Report Share Posted July 17, 2011 Quite balanced, a big gamble this card is, but still good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 Guess what this card is impressive for a newcomer, 9.5/10 no need to change em ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but frankly, the card is bad. Just because of the Summoning requierments that you have set up for it. It's too much of an requierment, for Dragons, nay for anything, any archtype, or any Type there is, banishish/discarding 3 cards from your hand just to Summon a monster? Just use Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2011 Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 "hen this card destroys a moster on your opponent's side of the field: It is banished" this is just Dark Magician of Chaos's effect, and so is the very last effect personally I'd change the summoning requirements to two dragon-types in your hand and one on the field instead 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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