NickiMinaj Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 [center][b]Alright. After discovering these new XYZ monsters, I've decided to try and counter them. Anyway, here are 4 cards that do the job. As usual, any OCG Grammar help will be greatly appreciated. Also, Image Credit to HP DOOM. Thank you for your wonderful archive. I even named a card after you. Haha. Oh, and if you're wondering where the names come from, "Tractus" means "space" in Latin. Space because the XYZ monsters are supposedly these anitmatter spacial cards. Rate and Judge! [/b] [b]1. Tractus Spheres[/b] - RMPOS - 00001 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusSpheres-1.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be activated when an Xyz Monster attacks a monster you control. Negate the attack and halve the ATK of each Xyz Monster your opponent controls. All Xyz Monsters on the field gain 2 Ranks. You must pay 3000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not, banish this card.[/i] [b]2. Tractus Baboon[/b] - RMPOS - 00002 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusBaboon-1.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be activated while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. For each Xyz Monster your opponent controls, gain 1500 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. When a "Tractus Mistress - Chan" you control is destroyed, banish this card.[/i] [b]3. Tractus Mistress - Chan[/b] - RMPOS - 00003 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusMistress.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. During each of your Standby Phases, activate 1 "Tractus Baboon" from your deck.[/i] [b]4. Tractus Cannon - HP Vortex[/b] - RMPOS - 00004 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusCannon-1.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. This card can only attack if you control a face-up "Tractus Mistress - Chan".[/i] [b]5. Tractus Demon[/b] - RMPOS - 00005 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusDemon-1.png[/IMG] [i]If you control a "Tractus" monster other than "Tratus Demon", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If an Xyz monster your opponent controls attacks this monster, negate the attack and raise the ATK of 1 "Tractus" monster you control by 500 points."[/i] [b]6. Tractus Synchron - Apparatus[/b] - RMPOS - 00006 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusSynchron2.png[/IMG] [i]"Tractus Demon" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Tractus" monsters This card can only be Synchro Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. When this card is Synchro Summoned, it gains ATK equal to half the total ATK of all "Tractus" monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, Special Summon 1 "Tractus Demon" from your hand or deck in face-up Attack Position.[/i] [b]7. Tractus Synchron - Malum Ensis[/b] - RMPOS - 00007 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusSynchron1.png[/IMG] [i]"Tractus Synchron - Apparatus" + "Tractus Demon" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This card can only be Synchro Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. When this card is Synchro Summoned, it gains ATK and DEF equal to half the total ATK of all "Tractus" monsters you control. Once per turn, if your opponent controls a face-up Xyz monster, send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy all Spell/Trap cards your opponent controls.[/i] [b]8. Tractus Swordswoman[/b] - RMPOS - 00008 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusSwordswoman.png[/IMG] [i]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. If an Xyz monster attacks this card, negate the attack. This card can attack all Xyz monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. When this card is returned to your hand, Special Summon 1 "Tractus" monster to the field in ATK position.[/i] [b]9. Tractus Monster - Devil Sword[/b] - RMPOS - 00009 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusMonster1.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. During your Standby Phase, lower the ATK 1 Xyz monster your opponent controls by 100 points.[/i] [b]10. Tractus Monster - Auris[/b] - RMPOS - 00010 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusMonster2.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. When this card attacks an Xyz monster your opponent controls, pay 500 Life Points.[/i] [b]11. Tractus Reaper[/b] - RMPOS - 00011 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusReaper.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be activated while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. Banish 1 monster you control to the Graveyard and pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon up to 3 "Tractus" monsters from the Graveyard to your side of the field in DEF position.[/i] [b]12. Tractus Flight[/b] - RMPOS - 00012 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusFlight.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be activated while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. Pay 1000 Life Points. Switch all face-up Xyz Monsters to DEF position until this card is destroyed.[/i] [b]13. Tractus Monster - Valde Baculus[/b] - RMPOS - 00013 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusMonster3.png[/IMG] [i]"Tractus Monster - Auris" + "Tractus Monster - Devil Sword" This card can only be activated while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. For each "Tractus" Monster in the Graveyard, raise the ATK of this monster by 500 points.[/i] [b]14. Tractus Synchron - Apparatus / Assault Mode[/b] - RMPOS - 00014 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusSynchron3.png[/IMG] [i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with its own effect or with "Assault Mode Activate". This card can only Special Summoned while your opponent controls 1 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. When this card is Special Summoned, it gains ATK equal to the total ATK of all "Tractus" monsters you control. This card can only Special Summoned while your opponent controls 1 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. When this card is Special Summoned, it gains ATK equal to the total ATK of all "Tractus" monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls, Special Summon one "Tractus Synchron - Apparatus" from your hand or deck.[/i] [b]15. Tractus King - Destroyer of Antimatter[/b] - RMPOS - 00015 [IMG]http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd363/NickiMinaj6969/TractusKing.png[/IMG] [i]This card can only be activated while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. If an Xyz Monster attacks this card, negate the attack. This card gains 500 ATK for each "Tractus" Monster on the field and in the Graveyard. When an Xyz Monster your opponent controls detaches an Xyz Material, remove the Xyz Monster from play.[/i] [b]I feel like this set has come together. There's a possiblity of me expanding, but right now I feel like it has a good balance. Any help with OCG and Grammar, along with suggestions for better artwork would be greatly appreciated.[/b][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 HP Vortex looks like a Big Sister from Bioshock shame you made it 1550 though, it's not searchable as easily "This card can only be summoned when your opponent has two or more XYZ monsters on his/her side of the field. If an XYZ monster attacks this card, negate the attack. During each of your standby phases, special summon one "Tractus Baboon" to your side of the field" <---A little too easy to flood the field this way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxCaller Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [font="Trebuchet MS"][size="3"]Pretty cool archetype, however, some OCG fixes: [color="#ff00ff"]Tactrus Spheres [color="#000000"]This card can only be activated when an [b]Xyz Monster[/b] attacks a monster [b]you control[/b]. Negate the attack and halve the ATK of each [b]Xyz Monster[/b] your [b]opponent controls[/b]. [b]All Xyz Monsters on the field gain 2 Ranks[/b]. You must pay 3000 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not, [b]banish this card[/b]. [/color][color="#2e8b57"]Tactrus Baboon [color="#000000"]This card can only be activated [b]while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters[/b]. For each [b]Xyz Monster your opponent controls[/b], gain 1500 Life Points during each of your [b]Standby Phases[/b]. When [b]a [/b]"Tractus Mistress - Chan" [b]you control [/b]is destroyed, [b]banish this card[/b]. [color="#ff8c00"]Tactrus Mistress - Chan [/color]This card can only be [b]Summoned[/b] [b]while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters[/b]. If an [b]Xyz Monster[/b] attacks this card, negate the attack. During each of your [b]Standby Phases[/b], [b]Special Summon 1[/b] "Tractus Baboon" to your side of the field. If this card is destroyed, [b]banish it[/b]. [size="2"]Not so sure what you mean by Special Summoning 1 Tactrus Baboon considering its a Spell Card, otherwise the effect would something like: "During each of your Standby Phases, activate 1 "Tactrus Baboon" from your hand? Deck? Graveyard? [/size] [color="#ffa500"]Tactrus Cannon - HP Vortex [/color]This card can only be [b]Summoned while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters[/b]. If an [b]Xyz Monster[/b] attacks this card, negate the attack. This card can only attack if [b]you control a face-up[/b] "Tractus Mistress - Chan".[/color][/color][/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Thanks for the OCG tips...I'll be sure to change them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 I like them, so far, although they're a bit situational and might slow a Deck down, but Tractus Baboon is a Spell Card; how can it be Special Summoned? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 I guess that it can't. I'll change it to make it "activated" when Mistress Chan is summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 [quote name='NickiMinaj' timestamp='1311518575' post='5383023'] Thanks for the OCG tips...I'll be sure to change them! [/quote] ok good, now HP Vortex is better, I'll give you 8.9/10 for the cards now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 Oh. Thank you very much! I tried, but the OCG is something that I need to improve on. Expect more new cards by the end of the week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2011 Report Share Posted July 24, 2011 I'm curious then. How big a set you plan to make this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 3 New Cards Added! Tuner and Synchro Monsters! Please rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 Tractus Demon's effect is OPed doubling the atk is WAY too much, not to mention you didn't even say it's a temporary effect especially since the 2 synchros following it get atk boosting effects of their own already Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 How about I halve an opponent's attack instead? And how would I phrase it that it expires during your next Standby Phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2011 Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 just find a way to cut the battle damage down either that or give it a set amount of battle damage due to their really high atk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2011 How about: "If you control a "Tractus" monster other than "Tractus Demon", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If an Xyz monster your opponent controls attacks this monster, negate the attack and double the attack of a "Tractus" monster you control."How about: "If you control a "Tractus" monster other than "Tractus Demon", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If an Xyz monster your opponent controls attacks this monster, negate the attack and double the attack of a "Tractus" monster you control." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 doubling the atk is a bit too much give it a more SPECIFIC number Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 "If you control a "Tractus" monster other than "Tratus Demon", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If an Xyz monster your opponent controls attacks this monster, negate the attack and raise the ATK of 1 "Tractus" monster you control by 500 points." I like this! Back and forth! Thank you so much for helping me! +1 rep! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 will there be more to this set soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted July 26, 2011 Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 great anti-Xyz set controls pretty much the field against heavy Xyz decks might be future anti-meta or something like ally archtype 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2011 @Ragnarok: I expect to make more. I just need some artistic inspiration or whatever... @Chuerta: Thank you very much! I tried as much as possible to destroy the new disgraces to card-making that are known as Xyz monsters...ugh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 BUMP! For extra cards and update on "Tractus Demon". Also, the Assault Mode of the Synchron - Apparatus was added simply because I made it for a contest and I decided that it could work well here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 27, 2011 Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 I can't believe that no one has noticed this: [quote]11. Tractus Reaper - RMPOS - 00011 This card can only be activated while your opponent controls 2 or more face-up Xyz Monsters. Banish 1 monster you control to the Graveyard and pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon up to 3 "Tractus" monsters from the Graveyard to your side of the field in DEF position.[/quote] Quick-Play Traps are big no-nos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickiMinaj Posted July 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2011 I apologize...how do you suggest that I fix it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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